Comment from Schalk Jacobs

Excellent

well done joseph, who better to assist in this fight against Margaret than Elizabeth Koren. Seem to recall she is one formidable woman and one you do not want to cross swords with. his could be interesting.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thank you, Schalk for taking an interest and going back to some previous chapters. I'm really flattered.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You put credence into your story and the facts are believable for the scenario of Nathan's extra marital liaisons with Margaret and Grace's reaction to it, is typical of the period(1920's). The reaction of the Koren family and how they confront marital issues, is also typical of how families are, during those period. God bless.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

thank you so much, nassus, for your insight.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Thanks for the pleasure of another outstanding chapter with unending conflict that picked up right where the last chapter left off. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

thanks, Ric.

Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

A very dramatic romance chapter. Poor Nate. Subject of a woman's scorn. But thanks to Elizabeth, there is hope. I get the impression she'll succeed in getting Margaret to stay away. At least for a while...Let us hope Nathan's capacity for a long war is intact!

GOOD one!

Mike

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

thank you so much, Mike.

reply by mikemagine on 08-Sep-2014

Sure thing, Amahra!!

Mike

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear amahar,

Quite a tale of infidelity. I don't think Nate is a very nice person. He isn't honest with himself or Gracie and is a unlikable character no matter how much he protests. This is written well in a captivating active style. Well done.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Winslow. Glad you found it interesting.

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Excellent chapter about the repercussion of Nathan's infidelity. You show clearly how messed up a mistake like that can make a person's life. Well done!

"Sure, why no(t)..."

:) Bev

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014

Thank you Bev. I added the t.

reply by Writingfundimension on 07-Sep-2014

You're very welcome, Amahra. :)

Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

Hello there~!
Wow! This is quite an interesting chapter. Makes me want to read it from the beginning. Someday, i'll sit and read this book from the beginning.
Well done!

JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)

(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014

Thank you.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Good going, Aunty!

Great presentation and formatting. Excellent dialogue. Your writing gets more polished with each post, you know.

This chapter is just the right length.

Oh-h these men who think they can have their cake and eat it ... they make me so mad!

Love,

Sonali



the Koren's door flew (open). Elizabeth

"Sure, why not(?)

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014

Thank you, my dear, I'll make the correction.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Excellent use of dialogue especially with Elizabeth. Made it sound natural the way you showed emotion of him worrying about going home late and showed that he had reason to be worried

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014

thank you, empoems. so glad you dropped by.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Amahra...this is another intriguing read that kept me captivated ...I understand the need to break chapters into small chunks for the reviews .this is good writing...it seemed believable...people are people whatever era...good use of dialect..
God bless

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014

thank you, kiwjenny. Blessings to you.