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Comment from mermaids
I always say when we are flat on our back,the only way is up. Many can relate to your problems,they reflect today's world. I wish you well.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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I always say when we are flat on our back,the only way is up. Many can relate to your problems,they reflect today's world. I wish you well.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thanks Mermaid for you time and understandings.
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Comment from Kingsland
This is a rather strange piece of poetic art. I believe it is supposed to be satirical. Your spelling of some words leaves me baffled, as spelled inputtween, inbetween and then actually spelling it correctly in another place, as, in between. I found this piece to be creative, but needing more attention to spelling and grammar. Over all it was an interesting piece to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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This is a rather strange piece of poetic art. I believe it is supposed to be satirical. Your spelling of some words leaves me baffled, as spelled inputtween, inbetween and then actually spelling it correctly in another place, as, in between. I found this piece to be creative, but needing more attention to spelling and grammar. Over all it was an interesting piece to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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This was corrected and a second one added to!
Thanks for your review and time.
I never deduct for grammar, only content by the way..
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I went back and read it again. I seen no corrections in it. It read and look exactly the same...
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I caught three but you must realize that i had to write thiis three times for twice when I went for the art it erased what was written in the end.
My fault..
Thanks,
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Comment from Genya
Not too sure how to take this. Fantasy or real. Such a strange piece to write. I enjoyed reading it but had such mixed emotions after. If it was real, then you really must have gone through some really hard times. This is the first part I have read so no doubt I would understand more if I had read the others. Sorry, but I found a few typos....the Book of life perhaps emoting will partially and the choking. I did read it several times, but sorry I did not understand. Any time I go there (every..maybe). I teaches me how to torture and punush (he maybe and punish). Hope you don't mind. Genya
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Not too sure how to take this. Fantasy or real. Such a strange piece to write. I enjoyed reading it but had such mixed emotions after. If it was real, then you really must have gone through some really hard times. This is the first part I have read so no doubt I would understand more if I had read the others. Sorry, but I found a few typos....the Book of life perhaps emoting will partially and the choking. I did read it several times, but sorry I did not understand. Any time I go there (every..maybe). I teaches me how to torture and punush (he maybe and punish). Hope you don't mind. Genya
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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All very, very, true and there is much more in my portfolio.
Can you acess?
Thanks for the kind review!
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Hi, will see if I can access. Would enjoy reading the rest. Thanks. Genya
