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Sweet Enemy

A 5-7-5 about a corn syrup spillage.

2 total reviews 
Comment from José Ángel


 
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In short, I was somewhat disconcerted. But well done your writing. Congratulations, success in the contest. A hug from Chile

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

Comment from c_lucas
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Glass bottles are pretty much things of the past. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very sweet read.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014