Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

What a great free verse poem about meditating and finding peace. It such an awesome place to be; I try to do it at least once a day. Well done and thanks for sharing. 8-)

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much. I like to mediate at least a few minutes each day - longer if I can.

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

A fitting tribute to nature is poetically presented in this spiritual free verse. It is very peaceful and pleasant.
A joy to have read.
Well crafted overall.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you for the great review:)

reply by Rmocruz on 01-Sep-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi Teresa,

You're right about no artwork. Sometimes, less is more. Nicely stated, allowing the senses of visualization to take over as one floats and meditates.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you my friend for the wonderful gift of the extra star. Your reviews are always appreciated:)

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 01-Sep-2014

I usually like artwork to compliment one's work, but you were so right - this was awesome without. Well done (*-*)

Have a great Veteran's day.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

excellent use of enjambment
I love the opening alliteration in I saturate my soul in silence
strong appeal to the senses
good alliteration in breeze as it blows
and consonance in absorbing beauty
float/bask/permeate - great choice of verbs that add life and mood
beautiful alliteration in glorious gifts in this thoughtful poem written in gratitude of God's many gifts to us
Brooke

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

thank you Brooke for your kind review:)

Comment from ronnie k

Exceptional

Awesome, just totally AWESOME, nothing is more is needed said "I saturate my soul in silence...." "Absorbing beauty through my eyes'

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much ronnie - I so appreciate your reviews and the six is a wonderful bonus gift from you:)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Teresa this is a lovely free verse depicting peace and how you absorb it. Leaving it free of art work is a good idea so that we can also absorb peace within us as well. Kind regards Dorothy x

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you Dorothy:)

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Ah, Teresa...that is just what the 'doctor' ordered...I read this three times and then closed my eyes and meditated for a couple minutes...I already feel less jittery aafter posting my last poem...thank you, it was perfect and great timing...padumachitta

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you - I'm glad it brought some peace to you.