Harrison Harrington Smythson
a story poem for children150 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love these story in a poem writings. Great rhythm and the flow was wonderful. You wove a tale taht both entertained and mesmorized. nicely done as always.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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I love these story in a poem writings. Great rhythm and the flow was wonderful. You wove a tale taht both entertained and mesmorized. nicely done as always.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Gretchen. I appreciate the lovely six stars and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is such a lovely story poem with an age old moral attached that will always inspire - no matter how far away we roam or what wishes we seek to pursue there is no place like home. Beautifully penned and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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This is such a lovely story poem with an age old moral attached that will always inspire - no matter how far away we roam or what wishes we seek to pursue there is no place like home. Beautifully penned and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Mystic Angel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
What a delightful story poem for children. It teaches about dinosaurs as well as having a little "there's no place like home" message. Evi
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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What a delightful story poem for children. It teaches about dinosaurs as well as having a little "there's no place like home" message. Evi
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Evi, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from N.K. Wagner
This story poem is just BRILLIANT, Brooke! May I email it to my grandchildren (with the proper credits, of course)? :) Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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This story poem is just BRILLIANT, Brooke! May I email it to my grandchildren (with the proper credits, of course)? :) Nancy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much for your thoughtful and very generous review. I would be honored if you shared with your grandchildren. :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a superb story in a poem, Brooke. Perfect with the dinosaurs. I'm glad he woke up in his own bed and wasn't dino food. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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This is a superb story in a poem, Brooke. Perfect with the dinosaurs. I'm glad he woke up in his own bed and wasn't dino food. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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LOL - thanks so much, Debbie, for your generous rating and fun comments :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
The rhyming of this is outstanding and perfectly paced. The way the poem was gradually layered was just super. It had an introduction, a full body, and then a great ending.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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The rhyming of this is outstanding and perfectly paced. The way the poem was gradually layered was just super. It had an introduction, a full body, and then a great ending.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Lois, thank you so very much for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Ah! What a wonderful tale with such a lovely message. My mother is an artist and when I was in elementary school I saw one of her paintings of a small house. My mother always captioned all her works and this particular one had 'Wherever I may roam, there is no place like Home.' I remember that very well. It was beautiful and true.
Love your poem which delivers almost the same message as my mother's painting.
Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Hello there~!
Ah! What a wonderful tale with such a lovely message. My mother is an artist and when I was in elementary school I saw one of her paintings of a small house. My mother always captioned all her works and this particular one had 'Wherever I may roam, there is no place like Home.' I remember that very well. It was beautiful and true.
Love your poem which delivers almost the same message as my mother's painting.
Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Kauser, thank you so much for sharing that story and for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
What an adventure. One thing I definitely have decided from reading your wonderful story, I do not want to nor do I intend to visit any part of the past. LOL. This was an exciting adventure story that I thoroughly enjoyed. Keep up the good work as I know you undoubtedly will.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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What an adventure. One thing I definitely have decided from reading your wonderful story, I do not want to nor do I intend to visit any part of the past. LOL. This was an exciting adventure story that I thoroughly enjoyed. Keep up the good work as I know you undoubtedly will.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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nomi, thank you so very much for your generous rating and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a magical dream adventure, and so perfectly written as a story poem for young children.
I thoroughly enjoyed it too. Lol.
If only we all could scrunch up our eyes after a wrong turn in life and have normality return.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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What a magical dream adventure, and so perfectly written as a story poem for young children.
I thoroughly enjoyed it too. Lol.
If only we all could scrunch up our eyes after a wrong turn in life and have normality return.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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seken, thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from S.Yocom
This is an excellent "Dr, Seuse" type of poem, Brooke. It's one that children would really enjoy and want to hear again and again. One of your best, and that's saying something.
Sally
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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This is an excellent "Dr, Seuse" type of poem, Brooke. It's one that children would really enjoy and want to hear again and again. One of your best, and that's saying something.
Sally
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Sally, thank you so very much, my generous friend. I'm delighted you enjoyed this so much :-) Brooke
