Harrison Harrington Smythson
a story poem for children150 total reviews
Comment from flamingstar
Gosh, you've done it again, by golly. You're a mistress story teller, to hold the momentum and rhyme from start to finish. And my son's name is Harrison!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Gosh, you've done it again, by golly. You're a mistress story teller, to hold the momentum and rhyme from start to finish. And my son's name is Harrison!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, flamingstar, for your generous sixth star :-) So, Harrison is your son :-) So glad I got him out of danger safely LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Enchanted2write
What a beautiful poem, you wrote. I love reading poems where they sound like a story has well. the words are intriguing and brings the reader in.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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What a beautiful poem, you wrote. I love reading poems where they sound like a story has well. the words are intriguing and brings the reader in.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Enchanted, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
My God Brooke, the way you write your stories into poetry, even me, I just want the story not to end, you are so so much in your element of loving to write, that it always shows why you are number one always in everything. I am so proud to have met you here, and especially I love Sawyer, this picture is unforgettable, how he responds to all kinds of anything he is doing. But that picture is amazing. She really knows how to take his pictures at the right time the right moment. I wish I had my six stars, but you know already how much I admire you and Sawyer. My sister lives in Calgary, nice places to go to. I hope you try not to miss him a lot, until Christmas when he is back. Hugs and love . Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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My God Brooke, the way you write your stories into poetry, even me, I just want the story not to end, you are so so much in your element of loving to write, that it always shows why you are number one always in everything. I am so proud to have met you here, and especially I love Sawyer, this picture is unforgettable, how he responds to all kinds of anything he is doing. But that picture is amazing. She really knows how to take his pictures at the right time the right moment. I wish I had my six stars, but you know already how much I admire you and Sawyer. My sister lives in Calgary, nice places to go to. I hope you try not to miss him a lot, until Christmas when he is back. Hugs and love . Terry xoxo
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Terry, thank you so very much, my gracious friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, what a magnificent achievement. You are a master of words, Brooke, and this is a rollicking good yarn. I love it and I would love reading it and I'm sure many kids would love hearing it, Giddy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Oh, what a magnificent achievement. You are a master of words, Brooke, and this is a rollicking good yarn. I love it and I would love reading it and I'm sure many kids would love hearing it, Giddy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Giddy, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, I enjoyed the cadence of the write, the creative turns of a dreamlike state, and the whimsy of the imagination of a child. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Brooke, I enjoyed the cadence of the write, the creative turns of a dreamlike state, and the whimsy of the imagination of a child. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Thank you, GracieAnn, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, this is quite a tale. I'm glad Harrison
Harrington Smythson the Third found out that home
was the best place to be. Good alliteration in
Harrison Harrington.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Brooke, this is quite a tale. I'm glad Harrison
Harrington Smythson the Third found out that home
was the best place to be. Good alliteration in
Harrison Harrington.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Jude, thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
One of the most beautiful poems I read in Fanstory. The rhymes and rhythm, I suppose, are perfect. It flowed freely. At the end of the poem. I marveled really at the way it was written. It was comparable to the legendary tales I had in school. And I recommend it as reading material for younger students in the lower grades. Once again, I say, perfect, magical, admirable...my sincerest congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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One of the most beautiful poems I read in Fanstory. The rhymes and rhythm, I suppose, are perfect. It flowed freely. At the end of the poem. I marveled really at the way it was written. It was comparable to the legendary tales I had in school. And I recommend it as reading material for younger students in the lower grades. Once again, I say, perfect, magical, admirable...my sincerest congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Dom - I really appreciate your encouraging comments and your most generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You are always welcome, Brooke. Dom
Comment from mikemagine
Charming:) It's a poem for kids, but us adults can enjoy it too! Very well done! You SHOW us as we journey with Harrison. We SEE things clearly. The T-Rex, the Triceratops, and Harrison's awe...This is impeccably written, far as I can tell:) And it's the perfect length for a story-poem, as I consider it.
Mike
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Charming:) It's a poem for kids, but us adults can enjoy it too! Very well done! You SHOW us as we journey with Harrison. We SEE things clearly. The T-Rex, the Triceratops, and Harrison's awe...This is impeccably written, far as I can tell:) And it's the perfect length for a story-poem, as I consider it.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Mike, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Sure thing, Brooke!!
Comment from GentleWind
You never cease to amaze me with your poetry and now a story in poetry! You bring quick laughter to my lips and a gentle tug of my heart. Well done again!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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You never cease to amaze me with your poetry and now a story in poetry! You bring quick laughter to my lips and a gentle tug of my heart. Well done again!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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GentleWind, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Good rhyming verse. Is this for really true?
HARRISON HARRINGTON SMITHSON THE THIRD
WAS ONLY A BOY WHRN STORY OCCURRED
BUT LET ME ASSURE YOU,IT'S TRUE, EVERY WORD
THIS RECORD OF HARRISON SMYTHSON THE THIRD
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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Good rhyming verse. Is this for really true?
HARRISON HARRINGTON SMITHSON THE THIRD
WAS ONLY A BOY WHRN STORY OCCURRED
BUT LET ME ASSURE YOU,IT'S TRUE, EVERY WORD
THIS RECORD OF HARRISON SMYTHSON THE THIRD
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
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thee-name,t hank you so much :-) Brooke
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THANK YOU!
