She's Missing
When someone disappears...and no one knows31 total reviews
Comment from granny goes viral
This does seem to be happening with great frequency these days, doesn't it? Lousy subject for the beauty that can be poetry. Well done, however.
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This does seem to be happening with great frequency these days, doesn't it? Lousy subject for the beauty that can be poetry. Well done, however.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Loanna,
You have no idea how drug addiction scares me to death. I guess I'm speaking mainly about those street drugs that totally destroy people. You captured this so well in your poem.
Hugs,
Lou
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Hi Loanna,
You have no idea how drug addiction scares me to death. I guess I'm speaking mainly about those street drugs that totally destroy people. You captured this so well in your poem.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Mark Valentine
"It must feel sad and lonely when no one cares you're gone" - as simple and profound a sentece as you'll find. Unless you count "If only that was all of her" - wow - that's one of those lines you just stare at for a while so you can take it in.
What a powerful, deep poem this is. "face no longer sweet" captures perfectly the idea that we're born innocent and waiting to be loved, and when, for some, that love doesn't come, they become can become people they weren't meant to be.
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"It must feel sad and lonely when no one cares you're gone" - as simple and profound a sentece as you'll find. Unless you count "If only that was all of her" - wow - that's one of those lines you just stare at for a while so you can take it in.
What a powerful, deep poem this is. "face no longer sweet" captures perfectly the idea that we're born innocent and waiting to be loved, and when, for some, that love doesn't come, they become can become people they weren't meant to be.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Until I read Smurphgirl's account of crack addiction, I had no real idea of its effects. A family so badly affected by this is tragic. Your poem really showed up the emptiness of a family when a member has been taken away by drugs, Giddy
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Until I read Smurphgirl's account of crack addiction, I had no real idea of its effects. A family so badly affected by this is tragic. Your poem really showed up the emptiness of a family when a member has been taken away by drugs, Giddy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from RGstar
A very well implemented poem. Your choice of wording delivered a true sentiment to the realities many of us pass by each day. Addiction for anything can be harmful indeed, and the ones mentioned brings only destruction and death.
Thee are many such that will never find themselves again yet we are quick to judge without reason.
Good write.
Best wishes, well worth my six stars.
RGstar
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A very well implemented poem. Your choice of wording delivered a true sentiment to the realities many of us pass by each day. Addiction for anything can be harmful indeed, and the ones mentioned brings only destruction and death.
Thee are many such that will never find themselves again yet we are quick to judge without reason.
Good write.
Best wishes, well worth my six stars.
RGstar
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from BritSoldier
It must feel sad and lonely when no one cares you're gone,
so when she left with nothing nothing remained to carry on.
I read this as sad but you did a good job nice poem
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It must feel sad and lonely when no one cares you're gone,
so when she left with nothing nothing remained to carry on.
I read this as sad but you did a good job nice poem
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from Drew Delaney
It is truly sad when someone give themselves to a drug based life. And they often do it at so a young an age. Haven't experienced life at all. Just trying to escape from whatever has broken them. But it is the wrong way to get healed. Very sad indeed. A wonderful poem showing off your good writing skills.
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It is truly sad when someone give themselves to a drug based life. And they often do it at so a young an age. Haven't experienced life at all. Just trying to escape from whatever has broken them. But it is the wrong way to get healed. Very sad indeed. A wonderful poem showing off your good writing skills.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Excellent poem.Very apt imagery to go with it.The lines below are very well-written.
See her standing, shoulders down
her blond hair, blowing free?
I like the fact that the blowing free ended with a question mark. Nothing about drug abuse gives freedom.The author notes were very helpful.Well done!
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Excellent poem.Very apt imagery to go with it.The lines below are very well-written.
See her standing, shoulders down
her blond hair, blowing free?
I like the fact that the blowing free ended with a question mark. Nothing about drug abuse gives freedom.The author notes were very helpful.Well done!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from l.raven
HI Loanna, it truly is sad...but like you said...when your cares are gone...you leave nothing behind...and nothing left to carry on...addictions so sad...so very well written...very well expressed...Picture perfect...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Loanna, it truly is sad...but like you said...when your cares are gone...you leave nothing behind...and nothing left to carry on...addictions so sad...so very well written...very well expressed...Picture perfect...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from Just2Write
So many lost souls these days. Drugs and the drug culture surrounding them are taking over many of our youth. There's so much despondency out there, and yes, there's parents who just aren't there when they're needed most.
Girls are especially vulnerable, and therefore targeted - but young males can also fall into the trap.
A great write, m'dear.
Rose.
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So many lost souls these days. Drugs and the drug culture surrounding them are taking over many of our youth. There's so much despondency out there, and yes, there's parents who just aren't there when they're needed most.
Girls are especially vulnerable, and therefore targeted - but young males can also fall into the trap.
A great write, m'dear.
Rose.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
