Home at last
Terza Rima55 total reviews
Comment from Emily George
Delightful read really uplifting. I liked the flow on from the end of one verse to the next. Your choice of picture created a perfect setting for the reader to focus on
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Delightful read really uplifting. I liked the flow on from the end of one verse to the next. Your choice of picture created a perfect setting for the reader to focus on
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Rmily - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Home at Last", Your country must be beautiful. I too, found pleasure and peace by walking in the woods on my property many days and nights ago. This is a lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. Carole
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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To the author of "Home at Last", Your country must be beautiful. I too, found pleasure and peace by walking in the woods on my property many days and nights ago. This is a lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. Carole
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Carole - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from seaglass
This is a beautifully rhymed poem describing the finding of the inner home. The forest has always felt like a cathedral to me. In nature and it quiet reverence, we can see so deeply into ourselves.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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This is a beautifully rhymed poem describing the finding of the inner home. The forest has always felt like a cathedral to me. In nature and it quiet reverence, we can see so deeply into ourselves.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks- glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Nosha17
They are exceedingly tall, very impressive. Good use of descriptive language and rhyme to describe your appreciation of nature. Most enjoyable and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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They are exceedingly tall, very impressive. Good use of descriptive language and rhyme to describe your appreciation of nature. Most enjoyable and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Faye - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from ravenblack
On a woods walk, there is always that arrival at a certain close of trees that speaks to you as cathedral. I was with you on your journey.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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On a woods walk, there is always that arrival at a certain close of trees that speaks to you as cathedral. I was with you on your journey.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Kingsland
You can then take a walk about in the bush. I liked this piece of poetic art. It was upbeat and flowed well in its thoughts and phrases. The picture worked in well with the thoughts and I found nothing to suggest for it... John
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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You can then take a walk about in the bush. I liked this piece of poetic art. It was upbeat and flowed well in its thoughts and phrases. The picture worked in well with the thoughts and I found nothing to suggest for it... John
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thanks, John.
Comment from thee-name
Nice rhyming poem. Very relaxing and peaceful.
A PEACE THAT SOOTHED THE TROUBLES OF THE PAST
A VOICE THAT WHISPERED,"YES, YOU'RE HOME AT LAST
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Nice rhyming poem. Very relaxing and peaceful.
A PEACE THAT SOOTHED THE TROUBLES OF THE PAST
A VOICE THAT WHISPERED,"YES, YOU'RE HOME AT LAST
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thank you!
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THANK YOU!
Comment from Liisa
Wow, what a great poem, thank you. I especially like the end of it, very metaphorical. I guess we all are longing to come home at some point in our lives. Great photo to go with the poem too.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Wow, what a great poem, thank you. I especially like the end of it, very metaphorical. I guess we all are longing to come home at some point in our lives. Great photo to go with the poem too.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Liisa
Comment from adewpearl
excellent chain rhyming in good terza rima pattern
good alliteration in phrases like which wound/drop down
excellent use of enjambment
beautiful descriptive detail of setting
wonderfully expressive
Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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excellent chain rhyming in good terza rima pattern
good alliteration in phrases like which wound/drop down
excellent use of enjambment
beautiful descriptive detail of setting
wonderfully expressive
Brooke
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Brooke, thanks for the kind words.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a very well written poem following, absolutely, the rules for this kind of verse, together with a good story. Good picture - which actually made me feel dizzy when I looked at it. Redwoods? Good luck in the Contest with this fine verse. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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This is a very well written poem following, absolutely, the rules for this kind of verse, together with a good story. Good picture - which actually made me feel dizzy when I looked at it. Redwoods? Good luck in the Contest with this fine verse. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Dorothy - not redwoods - wrong country!
