Vision and Sound: Their Stories
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Comment from mikemagine
"What is important is the learning." Yes. A LOT of substance here that is mixed with magical touches of your verbiage and imagination. "I can safely tell you that you are a soul." Another vital and true statement.
I also appreciate your use of light humor. Magic Felix seems likable. But what I like best is that you embarked on quite a journey, imo...Endeavoring to make concrete concepts and images of The Other World is gutsy, I'd say. I think too, that you've managed very well. I can't say objectively that you completely succeeded in showing us The Other Side, but your story is more than compelling. I'd say you are NOT full of something...:)
Thanks!
Mike
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"What is important is the learning." Yes. A LOT of substance here that is mixed with magical touches of your verbiage and imagination. "I can safely tell you that you are a soul." Another vital and true statement.
I also appreciate your use of light humor. Magic Felix seems likable. But what I like best is that you embarked on quite a journey, imo...Endeavoring to make concrete concepts and images of The Other World is gutsy, I'd say. I think too, that you've managed very well. I can't say objectively that you completely succeeded in showing us The Other Side, but your story is more than compelling. I'd say you are NOT full of something...:)
Thanks!
Mike
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Hareem.S
You have chosen a good subject to write about. This is an informative piece and i like how clearly you have penned down details. I like the questions you have pondered upon.
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You have chosen a good subject to write about. This is an informative piece and i like how clearly you have penned down details. I like the questions you have pondered upon.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from James Dooney
I feel that you have done well here michael. You capture the fantasy and the surreal and the real all in one. I love it ! Keep it up !
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I feel that you have done well here michael. You capture the fantasy and the surreal and the real all in one. I love it ! Keep it up !
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
I really like the last paragraph in your prologue. This entire piece reminds me of some of the same information I enjoyed reading several years ago. It was titled, "A World Beyond" by Ruth Montgomery. It detailed how souls kept returning to earth in reincarnation to improve or learn to move up further in the should world and how sometimes, they opted to come back in poor or difficult forms or conditions to move up more quickly, relearn an unlearned lesson in a past life, or assist in another soul's lesson. I look forward to reading this. Thanks for posting.
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I really like the last paragraph in your prologue. This entire piece reminds me of some of the same information I enjoyed reading several years ago. It was titled, "A World Beyond" by Ruth Montgomery. It detailed how souls kept returning to earth in reincarnation to improve or learn to move up further in the should world and how sometimes, they opted to come back in poor or difficult forms or conditions to move up more quickly, relearn an unlearned lesson in a past life, or assist in another soul's lesson. I look forward to reading this. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Ric Myworld
You have aroused my curiosity with your prologue and I'm looking forward to reading your first chapter. I'm not normally a fantasy reader, but I'm totally sure that words strictly defines where your story might drift. Good job. :-)
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You have aroused my curiosity with your prologue and I'm looking forward to reading your first chapter. I'm not normally a fantasy reader, but I'm totally sure that words strictly defines where your story might drift. Good job. :-)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a well written prologue that invites the reader to read on to figure out what this is going to be about. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more.
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this is a well written prologue that invites the reader to read on to figure out what this is going to be about. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from l.raven
OK Michael, I take it that Magic Felix is going to over see what Vision and Sound encounter on their trips back and fourth...as souls...sounds very interesting Michael...let us read...Luff Linda xxoo
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OK Michael, I take it that Magic Felix is going to over see what Vision and Sound encounter on their trips back and fourth...as souls...sounds very interesting Michael...let us read...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Interesting write-up.It can also be classified as supernatural.I saw a SPAG in line 3 para 1:'existence' not 'existance' unless it was intentional. May have made a nice contest entry for the prompt:Soul.Well written.
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Interesting write-up.It can also be classified as supernatural.I saw a SPAG in line 3 para 1:'existence' not 'existance' unless it was intentional. May have made a nice contest entry for the prompt:Soul.Well written.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from Writingfundimension
Sounds like a very interesting project, M. I like the idea of a watcher who, I assume, will be the observer of the story of the twin souls. Good luck with this very exciting endeavor.
:)
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Sounds like a very interesting project, M. I like the idea of a watcher who, I assume, will be the observer of the story of the twin souls. Good luck with this very exciting endeavor.
:)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from robina1978
I like this second part of the prologue even better than the first. I love that another soul tells their stories. I am sorry I have no six left for you.
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I like this second part of the prologue even better than the first. I love that another soul tells their stories. I am sorry I have no six left for you.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
