Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

Sounds like the poor thing was hit by a car.
And needed medical care.
Hope he does better when awake if not dead.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with contest.

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Hi Ine a six for this update and tanka, because you keep us up to date and that's very important to me. Gosh, I knew you had to go to the hospital, but I did not expect it so soon...
Glad you had a dreamless sleep, I know how restless your nights were lately. I hope everthing goes well and you will be home soon. Take care my dear friend. Hugs Fia

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine. I tied to phone you this afternoon. I came home today. Will try again soon.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

How can anyone dream being woken all during the nights by nurses and doctors. I hope you get well soon. I love the picture you selected for your lovely poem. Best of luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

reply by Cajungirl on 30-Aug-2014

you are welcome

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Wonderfully written tanka that you wrote for this prompt. Great use of description in your poem. I enjoyed the sence of hummor in your poem. Great job with the syllable count. I like the picture that you used. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

Sorry to hear about your hospital stay. Hope all turns out well and you'll be home soon. I've never been able to sleep much in a hospital.. Well done, Buck

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

They say we always dream, just that we don't remember it. You know how it is when you wake up, you remember, then 10 minutes later you have no idea what it was. LOL. Maybe this life is a dream? Hope all turns out ok for you. My best wishes. Les

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Dreamless sleep last night, I love to dream every night, that's a not a very good place to have a dreamless night, Good luck at the contest. God bless you. lakeport.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine

reply by lakeport on 30-Aug-2014

your welcome.lakeport.