Dreamless sleep last night
A Tanka, 5-7-5-7-727 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI sweetie, I am so sorry to hear you are back in the hospital....was hoping you were feeling better...just take care...all will be fine...dream sweet dreams...you are in my prayers sweet girl... Love ya....Linda Luff...xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
HI sweetie, I am so sorry to hear you are back in the hospital....was hoping you were feeling better...just take care...all will be fine...dream sweet dreams...you are in my prayers sweet girl... Love ya....Linda Luff...xxoo
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
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you are so welcome Ine...feel better...Luff xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Your right, Ine, I would have never guessed that. It's no wonder you had trouble falling asleep. Who could while going through something like that? Not me!
Good work, and good luck in the contest. :}
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Your right, Ine, I would have never guessed that. It's no wonder you had trouble falling asleep. Who could while going through something like that? Not me!
Good work, and good luck in the contest. :}
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
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I will, and you do the same, my friend.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I wish I could sleep like he is doing. I am glad you got a good night's sleep. I take it illness has been bothering you. It must have been pretty serious. You required two pints of blood. Here is to good health in the future. Great work.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
I love the picture. I wish I could sleep like he is doing. I am glad you got a good night's sleep. I take it illness has been bothering you. It must have been pretty serious. You required two pints of blood. Here is to good health in the future. Great work.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from RGstar
I hope your recovery a speedy one.
Uncertain how to rate this, I deviate from the norm and would just like to say; keep positive, keep strong, and thoughts and wishes are with you.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
I hope your recovery a speedy one.
Uncertain how to rate this, I deviate from the norm and would just like to say; keep positive, keep strong, and thoughts and wishes are with you.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from judiverse
Sorry to hear you're back in the hospital. Hope you're doing better. Maybe the rest and sleep will be good for you. I often have dreams that I don't remember, but there have been a couple of strange ones lately that I do remember. Your syllable count is right-on for every line, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Sorry to hear you're back in the hospital. Hope you're doing better. Maybe the rest and sleep will be good for you. I often have dreams that I don't remember, but there have been a couple of strange ones lately that I do remember. Your syllable count is right-on for every line, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
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You're welcome, and I hope you're doing better now. judi
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You do look peaceful there Ine. LOL Just kidding. Well you will feel much better now. Good job on the Tanka and a nice picture of you! Haha. Hugs. Nancy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
You do look peaceful there Ine. LOL Just kidding. Well you will feel much better now. Good job on the Tanka and a nice picture of you! Haha. Hugs. Nancy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from amada
Thank you for keeping us updated, dear Ine. I wish you the best, happy to know you had a good night of rest last night. Best wishes for the upcoming week.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
Thank you for keeping us updated, dear Ine. I wish you the best, happy to know you had a good night of rest last night. Best wishes for the upcoming week.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine
Comment from emrpoems
Sorry to hear about your hospitalization. Will keep you in my prayers and hope that all is well soon.
Great idea for using the tanka structure to inform us.
I wish you the very best in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
Sorry to hear about your hospitalization. Will keep you in my prayers and hope that all is well soon.
Great idea for using the tanka structure to inform us.
I wish you the very best in the contest
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Robina I hope your are feeling much better after your pks f Blood. I well written Tanka, the image is great so peaceful,
Well done
Good luck
Mary
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
Hi Robina I hope your are feeling much better after your pks f Blood. I well written Tanka, the image is great so peaceful,
Well done
Good luck
Mary
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine
Comment from trimple
Hi there Ine
I'm so sorry to hear that you are back in hospital.
Great to hear that you finally slept. But in hospital! eek!
Dreamless sleep last night,
the first time in many weeks.
You will not guess where
I'm in a hospital bed,
(receiving two packets blood.)
Did you mean ...
received two packets of blood?
Fine tanka Ine
Good luck in the competition my friend and get well soon.
much love and hugs
tracey :) xxx
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
Hi there Ine
I'm so sorry to hear that you are back in hospital.
Great to hear that you finally slept. But in hospital! eek!
Dreamless sleep last night,
the first time in many weeks.
You will not guess where
I'm in a hospital bed,
(receiving two packets blood.)
Did you mean ...
received two packets of blood?
Fine tanka Ine
Good luck in the competition my friend and get well soon.
much love and hugs
tracey :) xxx
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good weekend, Ine. That was what I meant. Hugs and love.