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Moving Home

The stress of moving

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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I could feel the underlying pain, Sandra. It seeps through the lines.

Have a little sympathy, and give yourself some time .. this is a very telling line, my dear.

Glad you are happy and settled where you should be.

Better late than never - here I am - ta dah!!

Have a lovely weekend, my friend.

All my love,

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Thank you, Sonali, I am happy to be back home, but it was hard moving away from all the friends I had made in Spain. You have a lovely weekend too! Lots of love, my friend! Sandra. xx
Comment from Rosalyne
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Hi, Sandra.
Your poem is well done, expressing the stress involved with moving. Moving is one of the most difficult stresses in life promising change and disruption to all that's familiar. You set roots in the place of living, create friends, make memories. I hope you move has gone well. This is never an easy decision for one to do.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you, Rosalyne, for your lovely review. Yes, I am home now and aften 11 years in another country, I am pleased to be back with my family and friends here in the UK. I will miss my Spanish friends, but with the phone, and Skype, I can keep in touch and go and have a holiday with them, so not too bad. Thank you, again. :) Sandra
reply by Rosalyne on 01-Sep-2014
    Hi, Sandra.
    I'm glad your back home and settled with family and friends. It makes the transition a bit easier. I've always lived in Canada other than one summer spent in Costa Rica. It was hard to leave after connecting with such amazing friends. I still long to return, such a beautiful country and people.
    Bye
    Rosalyne :)
Comment from Zue65
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I resonate with the message of the poem, moving away from the home that once had been your home for so many years can be very sad and lonely just like tearing away a part of your memory, or even a part of your soul. But finding a new home requires leaving the old ones too. I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much for your lovely review! :) Sandra
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Moving Home' is a well-written piece, which I and other readers would have very little trouble relating to. It was a pleasure to review a work of this calibre.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    What a lovely review, thank you so much! :) Sandra
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 02-Sep-2014

    Sandra, you definitely deserved the lovely review :-) the Duchess
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Moving home but also moving away from what you home. It would be hard not to move too. Great acrostic for the contest and good luck.
Teresa

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, Teresa, I am so pleased you liked my acrostic. xsx sandra
Comment from l.raven
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OH Sandra, I have moved and left friends behind...kept in touch with some...it is sad...but each day does bring new memories...I hope you are getting settled in your new home...a great poem...very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    It's always hard, isn't it? Yes, we are settling in nicely now. Having my family close has helped a lot. Thank you Linda, your review is lovely. :) Sandra xsx
reply by l.raven on 01-Sep-2014
    having family around does help...I'm glad you are happy where you moved...you are so welcome...luff
Comment from Aussie
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Methinks you are on a winner with this Acrostic contest entry. Your poem has a great rhythm and alliteration, not to mention great cadence. Now go look them all up! Moving is very stressful - you came home for mother and children, a worthy move. Still, you were happy in another country Spain. I think you pine for Spain - give it time.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you, Kay! I do miss the weather in Spain, at least when it isn't too hot. But I am settling in nicely now. The pain of my mother dying so soon after coming home, took some time to get my head around, in fact, it is still too painful to even think about not ever seeing her and my dad again. But, onwards, as you say, give it time. Thank you my friend! :) Sandra
Comment from judiverse
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Moving is always a painful process. My husband and I moved three times before we finally moved back home. Backing is difficult as if leaving friends behind. Excellent acrostic choice of words--moving home. Your rhyme and flow are well done, too. You have some excellent points about moving in this. Packing is a job which I hope I won't have to do again. It takes time to adjust to a new home, but it's always possible to keep in touch with friends and loved ones. judi

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, Judi. Yes, with 'Skype' I do managed to 'see' them when we talk. It is good what you can do to keep in touch these days. I also do not want to move again. Thank you, again, Judi. xsx Sandra
reply by judiverse on 01-Sep-2014
    You're welcome. It is easier to keep in touch these days. I wouldn't want to move again, either. judi
Comment from amahra
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There's no place like home. Click Click Click There's no place like home. Sorry you had to leave but know that you love being where it all started. Have a lovely life. Great poem loved the sediment.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much for this really nice review, and you are right, there is no place like home and being with your family. :) Sandra xsx
Comment from madhatter1977
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Hi, Sandra, this is a really good rhythmic acrostic - skilfully done and telling a personal story of moving home. I hope you settle back in the UK in a smooth, friendly way! Great poem, best wishes, Pete :)

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, Pete. I am settling in nicely now, I have such a lovely family to make sure I do. :) Sandra. xsx