Comment from Lpspider

Excellent

While this piece didn't really strike me as anything out of the ordinary, I still liked it and enjoyed it. Would recommend. However, the ending seemed a bit mediocre/typical...still five star worthy, but it could have been better.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

My dear friend, in a place like the one you dream of
you will find the cycle of rebirth! Absolutely lovely poem.

My soul
concealed,
awaits
the cycle
of rebirth.

Keep dreaming my friend,
Ana

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from AuroraSky

Excellent

The rebirth of soul is a beautiful experience...memories still go with it though...I wonder how people can 'forget' things at times.

Esp when it's X-mas ruined that exists in the form of pain.

Thanks Pili

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from jlgtiger

Excellent

Tu trabajo es excellente y musical. Some of the best work I read is simple in form but graphic in detail.

The flow is good and the picture is outstanding.

My soul, concealed....great line....tiger

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from JosephCa64

Excellent

Another beautiful piece Pili. A wonderful use of language and despite it being a non rhyming piece, it has a wonderful flow and cadence. I enjoyed it greatly. Nice work!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hi Miss Pili,
Simply beautiful... This leads the reader upon a journey allowing the sences to become involved... The imagination to run amid the words, Thank you for sharing my friend... Buddy

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from Aleksandramarie

Excellent

Oh dear I had a beaut of a day, nothing compared to others,, but this, just drew aout all the bad and breathed in new.....

thankyou, your words always ease my soul,

Can't believe I wasn't on your fan list, missed it somehow....

loved this, and it sooooooothed me... thanks,mpotter

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

wow
i loved this one!
great imagery!
excellent flow all the way through
and much emotion

great job on this one!!!

thanx for sharing :-)


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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2005