She brings the beauty....
The steadfast love...133 total reviews
Comment from DALLAS01
She is beautiful. I love the way you composed this poem, with so many similes. Each stanza is full of sharp imagery.
How fortunate you are to have her in close proximity.
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She is beautiful. I love the way you composed this poem, with so many similes. Each stanza is full of sharp imagery.
How fortunate you are to have her in close proximity.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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You are right, an incredible, positive, optimistic Ray of sunshine! Thanks for the empathetic review and comments, Blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Leineco
What a beautiful metaphor AND honoring poem! With the picture attached, it is clear you are writing in praise of your daughter, and in thanks to God for his gift of her. But equally, you could be writing (metaphorically) about Faith, or Dawn or even the breadth of Nature :-)
Very nice write :-)
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What a beautiful metaphor AND honoring poem! With the picture attached, it is clear you are writing in praise of your daughter, and in thanks to God for his gift of her. But equally, you could be writing (metaphorically) about Faith, or Dawn or even the breadth of Nature :-)
Very nice write :-)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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You are right on all counts, how can I not? Great review, thank you, you are most generous, blessings, Roy.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
What a way to celebrate and appreciate the unwavering love and mercies of our God! The beauty and love He has endowed us with when we see our little kids with 'innocent love' pasted and radiating in their faces... It is the doing of the Lord. I love this.
ola thomas
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What a way to celebrate and appreciate the unwavering love and mercies of our God! The beauty and love He has endowed us with when we see our little kids with 'innocent love' pasted and radiating in their faces... It is the doing of the Lord. I love this.
ola thomas
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Ola for realising where the praise goes for these beautiful gifts of love,for us, I love your kind and uplifting review and remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Charlene0513
To royowen,
A wonderful delight she has brought into your lives as her smile is infectious .
She is a gift from heaven and someone that will always be the "apple of your eye."
Great use of similes.
Charlene
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To royowen,
A wonderful delight she has brought into your lives as her smile is infectious .
She is a gift from heaven and someone that will always be the "apple of your eye."
Great use of similes.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Charlene for your on going support and positive comments and remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Delahay
It is easy to see how this beautiful child can brighten any day for you. I have no doubt she brings brings great joy to your lives.
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It is easy to see how this beautiful child can brighten any day for you. I have no doubt she brings brings great joy to your lives.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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She is the evidence of God's love! Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Sankey
Lovely poem Bro and equally lovely picture going with it. Sadly no Grandkids here. I do hope she grows up to know and love OUr Saviour for her self.
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Lovely poem Bro and equally lovely picture going with it. Sadly no Grandkids here. I do hope she grows up to know and love OUr Saviour for her self.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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She's in church every Sunday, and lots of little boys and girls who have parents who are great lovers of our lLord! They'll all there when the trumpet calls,, thanks for the great review, bro, grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from seaglass
A beautiful little girl that radiates the love she feels. This poem made of creative metaphors is a lovely gift of word to her.
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A beautiful little girl that radiates the love she feels. This poem made of creative metaphors is a lovely gift of word to her.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for this positive review and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from l.raven
OH Roy, she is so beautiful...so very precious...you are soooooo blessed to have such a beautiful family...I so love your poem....and the picture....God Bless...luff ya Lindaxxoo
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OH Roy, she is so beautiful...so very precious...you are soooooo blessed to have such a beautiful family...I so love your poem....and the picture....God Bless...luff ya Lindaxxoo
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Linda for your usual gracious comments and great review, I appreciate your support, blessings Roy.
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you are so welcome Roy...Luff
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful write to pay tribute to a sweet delight that gives light to your soul. great imagery presented about her and I just love that picture. I enjoyed reading this
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this is a beautiful write to pay tribute to a sweet delight that gives light to your soul. great imagery presented about her and I just love that picture. I enjoyed reading this
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you SW, for these gracious words and lovely review, blessings Roy.
Comment from skye
What a joyful, upbeat poem about the love felt for a child, and the happiness that one soul can bring to a family.
Great rhymes and lines, beautiful art choice, and I like the imagery of each example.
Well done.
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What a joyful, upbeat poem about the love felt for a child, and the happiness that one soul can bring to a family.
Great rhymes and lines, beautiful art choice, and I like the imagery of each example.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Skye, for your gracious words and lovely review, you are appreciated, blessings, Roy.
