She brings the beauty....
The steadfast love...133 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Jo
What a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. Thanks for sharing this. It was fun to read and introduces us to your sunshine.
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What a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. Thanks for sharing this. It was fun to read and introduces us to your sunshine.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Bobby Jo, for you're wonderful review and comments, love your name! Not heard in Australia! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from expressions9
A sweet poem of appreciation for your lovely granddaughter, Roy, with good abcb rhyme. I especially liked
"She brings the beauty of the morning,
With grace she brightens each new day,
She's the sparkle in the dew drop,
My joy within reveals God's way."
Grandchildren bring such joy, it's amazing! They are truly a blessing from the Lord,
Thanks for sharing :)
God bless,
Christine
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A sweet poem of appreciation for your lovely granddaughter, Roy, with good abcb rhyme. I especially liked
"She brings the beauty of the morning,
With grace she brightens each new day,
She's the sparkle in the dew drop,
My joy within reveals God's way."
Grandchildren bring such joy, it's amazing! They are truly a blessing from the Lord,
Thanks for sharing :)
God bless,
Christine
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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She comes in the morning smiling and greeting us so Joyfully, full of life and innocent beauty! I thank God for her! Thank you for the wonderful review and comments, blessings Roy.
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You're welcome! That's so sweet :)
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem about your granddaughter is has very good rhyme.
It tells of the love you have for one and another.
In your author note, the third paragraph you gave "GUID" did you mean "GUIDE?"
Good luck with your poem.
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Your poem about your granddaughter is has very good rhyme.
It tells of the love you have for one and another.
In your author note, the third paragraph you gave "GUID" did you mean "GUIDE?"
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you for noticing I shall look! Thank you for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Roy,
This is a wonderful tribute to your grand-daughter. Their presence is truly a blessing... You're lucky to be able to interact with her on a daily biases.
Loved the solid meter and expressive delivery of this piece, well done.
Hope you're having a great weekend, bill
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Hi Roy,
This is a wonderful tribute to your grand-daughter. Their presence is truly a blessing... You're lucky to be able to interact with her on a daily biases.
Loved the solid meter and expressive delivery of this piece, well done.
Hope you're having a great weekend, bill
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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You too Bill, thanks for the gracious review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from topanga01
Hello, congratulations, it is beautiful what you write, very beautiful words and very wellwritten.
He forgives if my English is not very good.
Greetings
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Hello, congratulations, it is beautiful what you write, very beautiful words and very wellwritten.
He forgives if my English is not very good.
Greetings
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Forgiven, thank,you for the kind review and comments, blessing, Roy.
Comment from Liisa
Really touching poem, thank you! Children are precious gifts, and the love between grandparents and grandchildren is very special and rewarding.
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Really touching poem, thank you! Children are precious gifts, and the love between grandparents and grandchildren is very special and rewarding.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the outstanding review, comments and magnificent stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Poetofheart2013
I really like poem and can tell that you love your
Granddaugter very much and that she means a lot to you.
Keep up the good work.
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I really like poem and can tell that you love your
Granddaugter very much and that she means a lot to you.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from Fluffyhead
like how neat your poem is and how you got it to rhyme and this poem reminds me of my nephew Jordan who is three and is a little comedian .
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like how neat your poem is and how you got it to rhyme and this poem reminds me of my nephew Jordan who is three and is a little comedian .
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ekim777
With concrete imagery this poem is a sketch of unblemished innocence. We have all suffered it. It's very beauty lies in its unfailing frailty. It is an ever transforming ephemeral thing struggling to establish itself. Why do we extol the love of God. It is hard enough to cope with human love.
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With concrete imagery this poem is a sketch of unblemished innocence. We have all suffered it. It's very beauty lies in its unfailing frailty. It is an ever transforming ephemeral thing struggling to establish itself. Why do we extol the love of God. It is hard enough to cope with human love.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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I guess we can't grasp "unconditional " or " neverending" we either recreate Him in our image or a creature's or deny Him completely, we refuse to see Him at all, He knows He exists! Thank you for the wonderful review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Samuel Dickens
Such lovely words for this beautiful child. My beautiful little darlings are all grown now, and making new babes for me to bounce on my knee. There's nothing better in this world, is there?
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Such lovely words for this beautiful child. My beautiful little darlings are all grown now, and making new babes for me to bounce on my knee. There's nothing better in this world, is there?
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for these great comments and lovely review, blessings, Roy.
