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The steadfast love...133 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
We have Grandkids who bring this same joy....not every morning but when they are here it is joy joy joy ....
Well done......she is a little sweetie.
God bless
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We have Grandkids who bring this same joy....not every morning but when they are here it is joy joy joy ....
Well done......she is a little sweetie.
God bless
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Thank you Jenny being a grandparent is the greatest! Thank you for the fpgreat review and comments, blessings, Rou.
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We grandparents are the most fortunate people on the planet, thanks so much Jenny, great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from Lulube
What a wonderful tribute to your granddaughter and at the age of 2 to have such a tribute written for. Great imagery and really fun comparisons, like the sparkle in the dew drop
A very alive and springy read. good rhyming nothing out of sorts.
good work
lulube she'll be so proud when she is older
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What a wonderful tribute to your granddaughter and at the age of 2 to have such a tribute written for. Great imagery and really fun comparisons, like the sparkle in the dew drop
A very alive and springy read. good rhyming nothing out of sorts.
good work
lulube she'll be so proud when she is older
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you LuLube, for the great review and comments blessings, Roy.
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Thank you so much LuLube for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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great tribute
welcome
lulube
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Roy - this is a beautiful little verse dedicated to your granddaughter. I know how you feel as I voice these same sentiments of yours to my granddaughters (and grandsons). They do bring such joy. You are lucky you have her near so you can see her grow and you will always have a close relationship with her. Kind regards Dorothy x
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Hi Roy - this is a beautiful little verse dedicated to your granddaughter. I know how you feel as I voice these same sentiments of yours to my granddaughters (and grandsons). They do bring such joy. You are lucky you have her near so you can see her grow and you will always have a close relationship with her. Kind regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Dorothy. For the wonderfully empathetic review, and comments,she is such a sweet little girl,brings so much joy.,blessings, Roy.
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Thank you so much Dorothy, my other GK's live in NY so we don't see them so much, this one, her parents have p
Comment from Ben Colder
Understand the meaning of this poem. My Mattie, always have come and sits in Poppa's lap and I get my morning kiss but she now has to catch the school bus so I will watch moment fade away. Thank you much for sharing this rewarding poem. Blessings to you and the family.
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Understand the meaning of this poem. My Mattie, always have come and sits in Poppa's lap and I get my morning kiss but she now has to catch the school bus so I will watch moment fade away. Thank you much for sharing this rewarding poem. Blessings to you and the family.
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Thank you Ben, for your great support bad comments, I grateful to you my friend, blessings. Bro Roy.
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Royowen,
Your two years old granddaughter is the hope of every new morning for bringing change and comfort. Your poem is wonderful as you wrote connecting with the real life. Very nice composition with chosen of matching words and simplicity in presentation.
"She fills our cup, with hope's wonder"
This line has touched my heart very deeply. All the best for your beautiful poem. Thanks and regards. Kamal
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Dear Royowen,
Your two years old granddaughter is the hope of every new morning for bringing change and comfort. Your poem is wonderful as you wrote connecting with the real life. Very nice composition with chosen of matching words and simplicity in presentation.
"She fills our cup, with hope's wonder"
This line has touched my heart very deeply. All the best for your beautiful poem. Thanks and regards. Kamal
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Kamal for these wonderful comments, and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Nosha17
What a cutie, I am sure she brings you much joy. Lovely words and rhymes to describe a loved one. The sentiment shines right through. Enjoyable read, Faye
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What a cutie, I am sure she brings you much joy. Lovely words and rhymes to describe a loved one. The sentiment shines right through. Enjoyable read, Faye
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Faye for these wonderful review and comments, blessings,
Roy.
Comment from gypsycaravan
Your grandchild is beautiful and, indeed, would light up anyone's day. How fortunate you are to be able to see her daily. Don't blink or she'll be all grown up. Thanks for posting her photo and the lovely verse telling of how she blesses your life.
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Your grandchild is beautiful and, indeed, would light up anyone's day. How fortunate you are to be able to see her daily. Don't blink or she'll be all grown up. Thanks for posting her photo and the lovely verse telling of how she blesses your life.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this empathetic review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She looks beautiful, Roy. We grandparents have a lot to be thankful for. I know exactly how you feel, and why you give thanks to God for bestowing this lovely little jewel on you and your family. Enjoy her life, she is a treasure! xsx Sandra xsx
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She looks beautiful, Roy. We grandparents have a lot to be thankful for. I know exactly how you feel, and why you give thanks to God for bestowing this lovely little jewel on you and your family. Enjoy her life, she is a treasure! xsx Sandra xsx
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You're so right Sandra, they are very precious, they are my teacher in so many, they teach to enjoy every day! Thank you for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Roy
What a gorgeous little granddaughter you have and no wonder you expound your wonder and glory in such detail. Spell-bound from your first line, well the title also, I've read with such pleasure and felt fully the strength of your love for this dear little one and for your gratitude to her Creator. I love all your beautifully expressed similes.She certainly looks a precious gem sparkling in the sunrise. So wonderful you have her close by and see her each day.
I can find no fault ..... I've enjoyed your rhymed quatrains .... love "dappled dancing plumage, Of eagle's wings in soring flight." - a beautiful display of visual movement. The last couplet is a stunner ... high impact, with great emotion. I've enjoyed your little ripples of alliteration and abundance of assonance which arouses the audial senses. No one can doubt this Grandpa loves his granddaughter ... a lucky little girl indeed. Warm Hugs - Lovinia.
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Hi Roy
What a gorgeous little granddaughter you have and no wonder you expound your wonder and glory in such detail. Spell-bound from your first line, well the title also, I've read with such pleasure and felt fully the strength of your love for this dear little one and for your gratitude to her Creator. I love all your beautifully expressed similes.She certainly looks a precious gem sparkling in the sunrise. So wonderful you have her close by and see her each day.
I can find no fault ..... I've enjoyed your rhymed quatrains .... love "dappled dancing plumage, Of eagle's wings in soring flight." - a beautiful display of visual movement. The last couplet is a stunner ... high impact, with great emotion. I've enjoyed your little ripples of alliteration and abundance of assonance which arouses the audial senses. No one can doubt this Grandpa loves his granddaughter ... a lucky little girl indeed. Warm Hugs - Lovinia.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Lovi, but I think I'm the lucky one, she chose me as one of grandparents, thank you for this fantastic review and lovely remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Roy, what a beautifully written expression of your devotion and love to a gorgeous young Granddaughter, I too am a big family man, I can see and feel the love you have in your words my friend, writing like that cannot be made up, it has to come from the heart, Bless you and your family, have a lovely weekend.
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Hi Roy, what a beautifully written expression of your devotion and love to a gorgeous young Granddaughter, I too am a big family man, I can see and feel the love you have in your words my friend, writing like that cannot be made up, it has to come from the heart, Bless you and your family, have a lovely weekend.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank,you Eric, I think you and I appreciate the families we have, I,know I can't express my love enough for them, words are inadequate! Outstanding review and remarks, blessings. Roy.
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You are very welcome Roy.
