She brings the beauty....
The steadfast love...133 total reviews
Comment from acerisestory
So lovely and sweet, Roy! This is a wonderful tribute poem to your darling granddaughter.
Your repetition of "like" is quite impactful. Your use of alliteration with brings/beauty/brightens; dappled/dancing; chases/conquers/cup/candle is great and enhances the flow of your words.
Lucky little girl and lucky grandparents! Thank you for sharing. Alana
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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So lovely and sweet, Roy! This is a wonderful tribute poem to your darling granddaughter.
Your repetition of "like" is quite impactful. Your use of alliteration with brings/beauty/brightens; dappled/dancing; chases/conquers/cup/candle is great and enhances the flow of your words.
Lucky little girl and lucky grandparents! Thank you for sharing. Alana
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Alana for these wonderful, gracious and generous comments, I appreciate you, blessings, Roy.
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You are welcome, Roy! Alana
Comment from LIJ Red
No need for notes. You can tell a granddaughter a mile away, and the poem cinches it. It rhymes properly, too.
Easy to call this excellent.
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No need for notes. You can tell a granddaughter a mile away, and the poem cinches it. It rhymes properly, too.
Easy to call this excellent.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and positive remarks, blessings, Roy,
Comment from Drew Delaney
She's a beauty, Roy. I have some gorgeous little ones as well. I know why you are excited and happy. They bring such joy into our lives. Your poem shows the happiness she has brought to your life. Isn't it grand to have grandchildren? I have 9.
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She's a beauty, Roy. I have some gorgeous little ones as well. I know why you are excited and happy. They bring such joy into our lives. Your poem shows the happiness she has brought to your life. Isn't it grand to have grandchildren? I have 9.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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I have four, but I'm grateful that I have any, God has blessed us, when you have children/grandchildren you understand blessing, thank you Drew for the understanding, gracious and kind remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Angel Debbie
What a beautiful sediment this write is.
Love of God, Love of Granddaughter that is just to beautiful to let go of. And to know all the thank you is to our Lord and Savior. Can't get any better than this.
Thanks for sharing and that granddaughter is so cute. She could almost be mine if her hair were blond. Cute
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What a beautiful sediment this write is.
Love of God, Love of Granddaughter that is just to beautiful to let go of. And to know all the thank you is to our Lord and Savior. Can't get any better than this.
Thanks for sharing and that granddaughter is so cute. She could almost be mine if her hair were blond. Cute
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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She's the only dark haired, brown eyed grandchild, all the others are blond and blue eyed, but we see her every day! She is such a sweet natured little girl! Thank you Debbie for dropping and positives you bring in your review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from mjac777
Beautiful abcb poem in tribute to your darling granddaughter.
"Sparkling" similes brighten up this dazzling piece - rhythm flows and is unforced.
That said - your love is simply and wonderfully expressed - not easy to do.
Even the picture captures her essence perfectly.
I so enjoyed this piece and found it an uplifting experience.
One minor, small point - if you made the image smaller, one could read while looking at her.
Thanks so much for sharing.
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Beautiful abcb poem in tribute to your darling granddaughter.
"Sparkling" similes brighten up this dazzling piece - rhythm flows and is unforced.
That said - your love is simply and wonderfully expressed - not easy to do.
Even the picture captures her essence perfectly.
I so enjoyed this piece and found it an uplifting experience.
One minor, small point - if you made the image smaller, one could read while looking at her.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Sorry about the size maybe I could go back to edit, but thank you for this most positive review and remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from L.M.Mullins
Beautiful tribute to one of Gods beauties and she is beautiful. I love hearing poppy just before being covered in a big hug. Great job with this.
Len
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Beautiful tribute to one of Gods beauties and she is beautiful. I love hearing poppy just before being covered in a big hug. Great job with this.
Len
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Isn't it the simple love and joy of a child the most precious thing? Thank you for this most positive review and remarks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey Roy,
What a beauty, with a dazzling smile, Grandpa. How lucky you and Grandma get to see her every day. Nice dedication.
Such a cute age too. Does she talk a lot yet? The twins do a lot of signing, but don't talk too much. They will be '2' in Dec.
Enjoy!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jackie (*-*)
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Hey Roy,
What a beauty, with a dazzling smile, Grandpa. How lucky you and Grandma get to see her every day. Nice dedication.
Such a cute age too. Does she talk a lot yet? The twins do a lot of signing, but don't talk too much. They will be '2' in Dec.
Enjoy!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jackie (*-*)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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She is an exceptionally gifted child, with a large vocabulary, positive, sunny, and has imaginary friends, her no.1friend is Phyllis, apparently they don't do that until 3 1/2 or there about. She lives in a house of adults, my wife is a language teacher, we speak properly to her! Thanks for the great review and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from flamingstar
She's absolutely gorgeous. Your opening lines were beautiful and melodic and drew me in immediately. A wonderful tribute to our Creator.
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She's absolutely gorgeous. Your opening lines were beautiful and melodic and drew me in immediately. A wonderful tribute to our Creator.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank,you so much for most gracious words and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Just2Write
Awww - your granddaughter and your tribute to her are lovely. Such touching words that come straight from a proud grandpa's heart.
Nice ABCB rhyming in your Quatrains.
Rose.
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Awww - your granddaughter and your tribute to her are lovely. Such touching words that come straight from a proud grandpa's heart.
Nice ABCB rhyming in your Quatrains.
Rose.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you for these kind, gracious and positive remarks and review,Rose, blessings, .roy.
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Roy: I sure wish I had a six for this very lovely work! Your granddaughter is absolutely gorgeous and very captivating! Your poem is a wonderful work of gratitude! Congratulations..Vance
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Dear Roy: I sure wish I had a six for this very lovely work! Your granddaughter is absolutely gorgeous and very captivating! Your poem is a wonderful work of gratitude! Congratulations..Vance
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you Vance, your dropping by is more than enough for me, I am always grateful for your kind words and excellent review, blessings, Roy.
