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In a positive light

Its about mans inner ability to create positive energy.

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Justin,

Great thought process in this poem, and true, good vibes can turn the sad, and bad around.

Welcome to FanStory. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    thank u
Comment from Glasstruth
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Very clever. Well worded, in that you used your syllable count wisely. Good alliteration and internal rhyming. Loved it! Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    thank you...