Along the Jericho Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Cancega Moon"Murder Mystery
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Comment from jadapenn
Aw, sorry that this story came to an end as all stories have to. But I hope there is a sequel in the offing. These detectives must have something interesting to keep them occupied and we need to read more about them. Loved the story. Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Aw, sorry that this story came to an end as all stories have to. But I hope there is a sequel in the offing. These detectives must have something interesting to keep them occupied and we need to read more about them. Loved the story. Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Jada, thank you so much for following along on my journey into this novel. I appreciate so much all your support, generosity and encouragement. I'm formulating a sequel, but must put the editing of this one on the front burner.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from Bryana
Dear friend, I must confess that I missed some chapters since I've been very busy this year. I admire your style of writing and I hope you start another story.
It made me sad that Edward Pierce's body had to be donated since he had no next of kin.
You are a very talented writer, it's a pleasure reading your work.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Dear friend, I must confess that I missed some chapters since I've been very busy this year. I admire your style of writing and I hope you start another story.
It made me sad that Edward Pierce's body had to be donated since he had no next of kin.
You are a very talented writer, it's a pleasure reading your work.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Hi, Bryana. So nice to hear from you. Thank you for this grand review. Your support and encouragement are deeply appreciated.
Especially given the time constraints.
It is sad that Edward's body was rejected in death just as it was abused in life, but medical students learn a lot from the cadavers which translates to benefits for the living. As one reader remarked, it's good Karma.
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from CR Delport
Congratulations on finishing the book. That is no small accomplishment. With this last post, you tie all the pieces together. This is really a great story and I enjoyed every post. Well done. The 6 is for the book overall and not just for this post.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Congratulations on finishing the book. That is no small accomplishment. With this last post, you tie all the pieces together. This is really a great story and I enjoyed every post. Well done. The 6 is for the book overall and not just for this post.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, CR. What a faithful reader you've been. I've always enjoyed the benefits of your insights and encouragement. Thank you so very much for the six and, more, the loyal support. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Well done.I can only imagine the relief you feel with the conclusion of this brilliant novel.When are we reading the next one?keep writing!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Well done.I can only imagine the relief you feel with the conclusion of this brilliant novel.When are we reading the next one?keep writing!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Hello, my friend. I am relieved that I'm not under the 'gun' to post regularly as I pretty much wrote the story by the seat of my pants as they say. But I have a lot of editing work ahead of me. Meanwhile, I'm going to be putting out a new project very soon on the site.
Thanks so much for the support and encouragement. I very much appreciate you!
:) Bev
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This has been a wonderful story, Bev, even just the last part that I was privileged to read. I liked the way your conclusion covered all the characters because that is very satisfactory for a reader. In my humble opinion you are an excellent, (that doesn't seem inadequate,) writer and I for one admire your ability, Giddy
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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This has been a wonderful story, Bev, even just the last part that I was privileged to read. I liked the way your conclusion covered all the characters because that is very satisfactory for a reader. In my humble opinion you are an excellent, (that doesn't seem inadequate,) writer and I for one admire your ability, Giddy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Giddy. I am so very appreciative of your wonderful review and am honored by your very kind words of encouragement. You're such a sweet lady! :) Bev
Comment from chasennov
Along the Jericho Road 'Cancega Moon.' Another excellent chapter added to your book, Bev. I enjoyed the read as always. Should it perhaps be; Below(,) the sun turned the sky crimson red....Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Along the Jericho Road 'Cancega Moon.' Another excellent chapter added to your book, Bev. I enjoyed the read as always. Should it perhaps be; Below(,) the sun turned the sky crimson red....Well done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, C. I appreciate your generous review and sharp eagle eye! Hope you have a great holiday weekend. :) Bev
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You are most welcome, Bev. Have a great weekend, I know I will. Kind regards.
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Thanks again, C. :) Bev
Comment from Aussie
Nice to see your photo - and I bet you are chuffed that your book is now finally finished? Happy and sad together. You have closed the story well by letting your readers know just what happened to all the characters, good and bad. What next? Well done my professional-writing friend!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Nice to see your photo - and I bet you are chuffed that your book is now finally finished? Happy and sad together. You have closed the story well by letting your readers know just what happened to all the characters, good and bad. What next? Well done my professional-writing friend!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Another project in the wings -- a novel I started a few years back but never finished. The first chapter will be out next week.
Thanks, Kay, for your kind insights and encouragements. Yes, I am feeling a bit sad today, but I will be living with the novel for some time yet as I work to edit it for (hopefully) publication.
Hugs, Bev
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Dis old lady hopes you be happy camper soon!
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Aw, thanks so much, Kay. I'm actually dealing with my blues by editing my next novel's first chapter LoL. :) Bev
Comment from c_lucas
The sixer is for all the hard work you put into your story which was very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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The sixer is for all the hard work you put into your story which was very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Charlie, thank you so much. You contributed to the novel on so many levels. A heartfelt thank you and a big virtual hug! :) Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Waiting for your next endeavor
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Thanks so much, Charlie. It's a re-posting, so I may have a few questions if you don't mind. :) Bev
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Ask away. Nameless does it all the time. Heck, even I will stop and ask myself questions.(LOL)
You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
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Thanks, Charlie. I'm going to be putting an old novel back out. 'Tom' provided some basic instructions which I hope will become obvious when I go to do it LoL.
Comment from Acquired Taste
A very good ending to what I can only assume was a fabulous book! I'm sorry, I've not read any of your material, but this wrap-up has encouraged to me read several chapters. Good writing is good writing - review or not, I truly enjoy a good read.
Congratulations on a most wrothy accomplishment! Regards, AT=/
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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A very good ending to what I can only assume was a fabulous book! I'm sorry, I've not read any of your material, but this wrap-up has encouraged to me read several chapters. Good writing is good writing - review or not, I truly enjoy a good read.
Congratulations on a most wrothy accomplishment! Regards, AT=/
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Hello AT. How very kind of you to review so generously. I really appreciate your encouragement and congratulations! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Bev, his epilogue brought tears to my eyes! One, because you wrapped everything up so nicely, and two, I will miss this amazing thriller. I must confess, I got a bit of a chill with Edward Pearce's body being donated to science. I wouldn't want to be the medical student cutting into that body. A six foot spider could emerge!
A HEARTY congratulations on completing a worthy project; a book and story of your own creation. An enormous accomplishment, Bev.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Bev, his epilogue brought tears to my eyes! One, because you wrapped everything up so nicely, and two, I will miss this amazing thriller. I must confess, I got a bit of a chill with Edward Pearce's body being donated to science. I wouldn't want to be the medical student cutting into that body. A six foot spider could emerge!
A HEARTY congratulations on completing a worthy project; a book and story of your own creation. An enormous accomplishment, Bev.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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A six foot spider - that's a terrific visual, my friend.
Marietta, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your encouragement, support and generosity. I thought I'd feel a bit relieved when I typed THE END, but was surprised at feeling lost a bit -- and sad. I think that's why I waited so long to post the epilogue. BTW, I used your format as inspiration.
Well, as we've discussed, on to other projects. I'm lucky to have a wonderful friend and ally in you.
Hugs, Bev
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Wasn't that the size of the spider that harassed Pearce in one of your chapters? At least it loomed that large in my imagination! LOL
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Oh gosh, you have a better memory than I do, Marietta. You're right LoL. :)
