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Sunshine and I

a children's poem in rhyming couplets

151 total reviews 
Comment from Zue65
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You were at it again as usual Brooke, where you do best exploring beautiful Sawyer poems about the sun and moon and their respective duties during daytime and nighttime.I have nothing to say about the rhythm because it is perfect. God bless.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
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Another real professional write for Sawyer's book. You are recording so many good memories for your Grandson. I am sure he will love you more and more as he fully understands each one and can read them for himself. Thanks for sharing your skills and love with your admirers. Bob

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much, Bob :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley B
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Dear Brooke, Sawyer is so cute. Thank you for sharing this great rhyming poem with us. It also helps the children learn the difference between the sun and the moon. Great job, Shirley

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Thank you, Shirley, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
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Boy he's getting tall. Is his daddy six feet? Loved the poem and your poems are so right for children to recited. I know I may have told you this, but you have the perfect child's mind for writing this kind of poetry.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much, Nancy - yeah, his dad is about 6 feet - his uncle eric, his mom's brother, is even taller as are all my nephews :-) Brooke
reply by amahra on 31-Aug-2014
    Brook you always call me Nancey...its Amahra.LOL
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Lord, I am so sorry :-)
Comment from Bobby Jo
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Very cute, I never see it that way, but I guarantee kids do. This is great, as you have captured it again with the kids. Fun poem.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Bobby Jo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LOA7
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Great, adwepearl! Even though it was the "sun and I" the moon was invited to join in. Soon the sun and moon will change places with the seasons. A never ending cycle :-)

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    LOA7, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Poetofheart2013
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I really really like your poem about sunshins you write poems very nicely with a lot of emotion's in them
thats very good. keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Poetofheart, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Fluffyhead
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cute poem about your grandchild and your kids love the symbolism and the way it is presented have a great day .also the picture rocks

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Fluffyhead, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
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Hello Brooke,
I appreciated this thought of the advantages of the day verses the night. I had a friend in high school (an all-state wrestler), that, as we were night skiing, commented on the fact that the sun was wasted during the day, when it was already light. He thought the sun would be more valuable if it shone at night...when it was dark! Lol. Wrestler's, huh?
Still, I enjoyed your simple and well metered approach to the subject.
Great picture of Sawyer enjoying his outing...the country-side reminds me of the area where I grew up...beautiful!
Hope you're having a good holiday weekend, best wishes, Bill

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Bill, hey, you can't really argue with his logic, can you? LOL
    Thanks so much for the smile and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
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I love the photo and your rhyming poem. Not an easy meter to choose. But you cope with everything. Original subject for children about the sun and the moon.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Ine, Happy Sunday, and thank you for your gracious review :-) Brooke