Sunshine and I
a children's poem in rhyming couplets151 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Lovely poem for a child for with Sawyer's education that is almost inevitable as he is growing up within them all. He is really seeing the world as it is - at least the beautiful parts.
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Lovely poem for a child for with Sawyer's education that is almost inevitable as he is growing up within them all. He is really seeing the world as it is - at least the beautiful parts.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Alan - yep, his parents are making sure he sees all the wonders the world has to offer :-) Brooke
Comment from Joseph W. Sestrich
Very much liked the lines drawn here between day light and night. Especially enjoyed how you worked in sessions of play for both. It was cool how you expressed you joy of the one-on-one time you had with the sun. A fun poem to read.
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Very much liked the lines drawn here between day light and night. Especially enjoyed how you worked in sessions of play for both. It was cool how you expressed you joy of the one-on-one time you had with the sun. A fun poem to read.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Joseph, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
This is another cute and fun poems for children. All about enjoying the sunshine and playing all day. Giving moonbeams fair time for their nighttime exploits as well. Avery easy read.
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This is another cute and fun poems for children. All about enjoying the sunshine and playing all day. Giving moonbeams fair time for their nighttime exploits as well. Avery easy read.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Jewell McChesney
The message of your poem is filled to the brim with sunbeams and joy. This makes me desire a day outside after being cooped up for a week. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift and the muse of your beautiful grandson.
Beautifully written with not one nit to pick at.
Love,
Jewell
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The message of your poem is filled to the brim with sunbeams and joy. This makes me desire a day outside after being cooped up for a week. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift and the muse of your beautiful grandson.
Beautifully written with not one nit to pick at.
Love,
Jewell
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Jewell, how lovely to hear from you - thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from risktaker
I love the story. I like the choice of words, and the imagery. Entertaining portrayal of the role of the sun and the moon. I relate to " Sun tossed his rays and I caught each one-nothing to stop us till daytime was done." Message well expressed.
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I love the story. I like the choice of words, and the imagery. Entertaining portrayal of the role of the sun and the moon. I relate to " Sun tossed his rays and I caught each one-nothing to stop us till daytime was done." Message well expressed.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, risktaker :-) Brooke
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Comment from s.m.kirby
This is a lovely poem on spending a day outside in the sun,It has a worm and happy feeling to it,The picture goes well with it I enjoyed this.
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This is a lovely poem on spending a day outside in the sun,It has a worm and happy feeling to it,The picture goes well with it I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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s.m.kirby, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
Sunshine and I,that's beautiful picture,amd a beautiful childrens store, nice rhyming couplets.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport,
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Sunshine and I,that's beautiful picture,amd a beautiful childrens store, nice rhyming couplets.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport,
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Erich :-) Brooke
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is so beautiful, so magic! Love your style , good rhyme and such delightful imagery. Love the picture and determined walk in the sun.
GREAT job my friend!
:)
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This is so beautiful, so magic! Love your style , good rhyme and such delightful imagery. Love the picture and determined walk in the sun.
GREAT job my friend!
:)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Aurora, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Rmocruz
A very light hearted children's theme poetically presented, well rhymed in quatrain format. I especially liked the colorful wordplay in the last quatrain.
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A very light hearted children's theme poetically presented, well rhymed in quatrain format. I especially liked the colorful wordplay in the last quatrain.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Rmocruz, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome Brooke, my pleasure.
Rich.
Comment from misscookie
No matter what you write it always makes me smile
I thought the awesome picture
is perfect for your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
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No matter what you write it always makes me smile
I thought the awesome picture
is perfect for your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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thanks so very much, misscookie :-) Brooke
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It was my pleasure, have a safe week end
Cookie
