Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Brooke - Three clever little stanzas - always well written. And a good picture of Sawyer striding out with a determined step. Good rhyming couplets throughout. Kind regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Dorothy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

A wonderful poem , a day full of fun for Sawyer to play in the sun
while the moon relax. Great style , good rhyme and such delightful
imagery. Love the picture and determined walk in the sun.... Pili

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 29-Aug-2014

You welcome, ;:--). Pili

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

What a fun poem to read. You and sunshine spending the day together. I love the children's poems you write. Grandmotherhood looks good on you, Brooke!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Trybuck

Exceptional

Some may believe the boy is telling about the sunshine being his playmate but I believe the boy is your sunshine and you can't wait till the next time you see him...

Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Buck, thank you so much, my insightful and generous friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

Your poem reflects the simple joy a child feels during the course of a day. I really enjoyed the changing meter within each stanza. Variety is the spice of life.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Lou, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

I love how you set the child into the scene here. You can really relate the pic and words well together, as if he is telling the story of the sunshine !

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

James, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

cute poem, like the childlike manner of telling this story through a childs eye. The setting for having a date and not inviting moonbeams is real cute.
great rhymes and fast paced reading.
children will love this as I do

lulube

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

lulube, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Wow! Sawyer is starting to look like a young man. Nice stride!

Yep, I enjoyed your dactylic meter. Da dum dum Da. Fun, when you get the hang of it. I enjoyed the rhymes and the great beat. Good stuff, Brooke.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Adrienne, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from trimple

Excellent

What a wonderful way of celebrating the joy of just being. The sun and the moon accompanying our every moment.

Your grandma status must be exceedingly high Brooke. You ooze pride in your lovely poems with sawyer in mind.

Beautiful.......

kindest regards

tracey :)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Tracey, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Brooke, some times just me and my shadow are great company...a great poem of Sawyer playing in the sunshine...Ya know I love the picture...and a wonderful poem you...Luff Linda xxoo love

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 29-Aug-2014

you are so welcome sunshine...xxoo