Gold Of Dawn
A Naani22 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
What a pretty naani poem of young lovers waking to a new day - a touch of Romeo and Juliet perhaps...
I loved those first two expressive lines, although the real meaning lies in the last line.
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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What a pretty naani poem of young lovers waking to a new day - a touch of Romeo and Juliet perhaps...
I loved those first two expressive lines, although the real meaning lies in the last line.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Hello kiwisteveh, thank you for your wonderful review and for sharing your thoughts. Those last two lines were changed many times, and I wasn't sure if they would be well accepted, but they were. Once again thank you, especially for those golden stars that will melt into the gold of dawn. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from c_lucas
The dawning of a new day holds promises galore. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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The dawning of a new day holds promises galore. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Hello c_lucas, thank you for the great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
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You're welcome, LB. Charlie
