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My mom's final words
82 total reviews
Comment from
Lynette Marie
Your last line gave me goosebumps. All her family gathered around her to say goodbye and offer comfort, and yet she tried to comfort them. A mark of a truly wonderful mother. Thank you for sharing this moment.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
Thank you, I'm humbled. thanks for the 6 star review.
Comment from
Auntie Kath
Wow! How moving the story is as it is presented. I feel your pain and tears filled my eyes. It is the way you presented the story that made it so riveting and I feel you did a wonderful job. Moving closer to the chair, anticipating what to do and say, is all so real. I am very sorry for the loss of your mother. The picture of the empty chair is so fitting as is the last two lines of your story.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
I'm humbled for the 6 star review.
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