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Final Words of Life

My mom's final words

82 total reviews 
Comment from Lynette Marie
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Your last line gave me goosebumps. All her family gathered around her to say goodbye and offer comfort, and yet she tried to comfort them. A mark of a truly wonderful mother. Thank you for sharing this moment.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
    Thank you, I'm humbled. thanks for the 6 star review.
Comment from Auntie Kath
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow! How moving the story is as it is presented. I feel your pain and tears filled my eyes. It is the way you presented the story that made it so riveting and I feel you did a wonderful job. Moving closer to the chair, anticipating what to do and say, is all so real. I am very sorry for the loss of your mother. The picture of the empty chair is so fitting as is the last two lines of your story.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
    I'm humbled for the 6 star review.