Fanstory
Acrostic tribute dedicated to the dedicated writers here55 total reviews
Comment from kintesiegel
Very nicely done. Your true nature is reflected in this gracious poem. Good luck with the contest. I enjoyed reading this work.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Very nicely done. Your true nature is reflected in this gracious poem. Good luck with the contest. I enjoyed reading this work.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Aw, what a sweet thing to say. Thanks for your lovely comments. Glad you enjoyed, K. Blessings, rd
Comment from Oatmeal
rama,
The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out. I enjoyed this poem very much. Reading it was a pleasure. There was only one problem that I noticed.
artists, (word-smiths), and late night keyboard tappers,
word-smith
**wordsmith
Everything else looked picture-perfect.
You wrote this one very well.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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rama,
The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out. I enjoyed this poem very much. Reading it was a pleasure. There was only one problem that I noticed.
artists, (word-smiths), and late night keyboard tappers,
word-smith
**wordsmith
Everything else looked picture-perfect.
You wrote this one very well.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your nice comments, Oatmeal--good to hear form you and glad you enjoyed this. I debated about making wordsmiths one word. Will do. Thanks! Love, rd
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Madam Rama Devi,
We have got a big platform www.fanstory.com which is helping to the interested writers around the globe to explore with their capacity of writing and to make friends to share each other.
Very nice Acrostic Poetry, written with inserting very selective words and beautifully composed.
Thanks and regards.
Kamal
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Dear Madam Rama Devi,
We have got a big platform www.fanstory.com which is helping to the interested writers around the globe to explore with their capacity of writing and to make friends to share each other.
Very nice Acrostic Poetry, written with inserting very selective words and beautifully composed.
Thanks and regards.
Kamal
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your very kind comments, K. Glad you enjoyed.
Warm Regards, rd
Comment from Jendowoz
Nice, Rama.
I realised when I came back on that my membership had run out so I have re-subscribed for 2 years. Fanstory has helped me a lot and best of all I met you here! Love the acrostic. Says what a lot of people feel so cleverly done too.
Have had a couple more rejections but it's still out there. Trying new publishers all the time.
love,
Jen
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Nice, Rama.
I realised when I came back on that my membership had run out so I have re-subscribed for 2 years. Fanstory has helped me a lot and best of all I met you here! Love the acrostic. Says what a lot of people feel so cleverly done too.
Have had a couple more rejections but it's still out there. Trying new publishers all the time.
love,
Jen
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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So glad you're back, dear Jen. I've been wondering how you are and how the book is faring out there in the publishing world. Keep trying! Welcome back. Thanks for your kind review and your lovely friendship too. Love, rd
Comment from catch22
Sat nam RD, what a lovely and thoughtful tribute to the gems on Fanstory! It's very true that there's lots of undiscovered talent here and diamonds in the rough that just need polishing. I love the internal rhyming in Style/mile and the description of the writers as late-night keyboard tappers. Very clever. Hugs to you and Namaste.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Sat nam RD, what a lovely and thoughtful tribute to the gems on Fanstory! It's very true that there's lots of undiscovered talent here and diamonds in the rough that just need polishing. I love the internal rhyming in Style/mile and the description of the writers as late-night keyboard tappers. Very clever. Hugs to you and Namaste.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Sat Nam, dear Pam. Glad you enjoyed this. Always nice to hear from you. Hugs and Namaste, rd
Comment from L.lora
Succinct, fully packed with great
wording that flows easily thourough-out
your poem. A very nice tribute for all
those at fanstory. The best of luck with
your contest. Lora
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Succinct, fully packed with great
wording that flows easily thourough-out
your poem. A very nice tribute for all
those at fanstory. The best of luck with
your contest. Lora
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Lora! Warm welcome back--ow lovely to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed this. Hugs, rd
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is brilliant, Rama! And that is exactly what Fanstory stands for. I bet Tom will enjoy this one, probably use it to advertise what a wonderful place the Fanstory site is. I like the hint of rhyme in it too, I think it is a really good acrostic entry. Good luck. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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That is brilliant, Rama! And that is exactly what Fanstory stands for. I bet Tom will enjoy this one, probably use it to advertise what a wonderful place the Fanstory site is. I like the hint of rhyme in it too, I think it is a really good acrostic entry. Good luck. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your enthusiastic response, dear Sandra.So glad you enjoyed the hint of rhyme, too. I enjoyed trying to make it musical that way. Love and smiles, rd
Comment from nancyjam
Ah, beautifully said, rd. Perfect wording in your
Acrostic to describe our writing family.
Smooth flowing with nice use of internal rhyme,
alliteration and assonance. Thank you for sharing. Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Ah, beautifully said, rd. Perfect wording in your
Acrostic to describe our writing family.
Smooth flowing with nice use of internal rhyme,
alliteration and assonance. Thank you for sharing. Nancy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thank you, dear Nancy. Glad you enjoyed. Love, rd
Comment from Just2Write
Awww - We DO have a wonderfully global community here at FS - It is one of the main things I like about it. So much to learn from others and their perspectives from their home countries.
Loved the term 'late night keyboard tappers'
So many of us are - It touches on the love we have for writing - but, also the power that writing has over us.
Great Acrostic, Rama.
Rose.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Awww - We DO have a wonderfully global community here at FS - It is one of the main things I like about it. So much to learn from others and their perspectives from their home countries.
Loved the term 'late night keyboard tappers'
So many of us are - It touches on the love we have for writing - but, also the power that writing has over us.
Great Acrostic, Rama.
Rose.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thanks, sweet Rose. I appreciate your lovely and insightful comments. Big Warm Smiles, rd
Comment from c_lucas
Fanstory has helped many a writer to improve their skills over the years. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a good read.
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Fanstory has helped many a writer to improve their skills over the years. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a good read.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thank you, C. Glad you enjoyed. Warmly, rd
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You're welcome, RD. Charlie
