Don't Stop Me Now
200 words. Contest Entry47 total reviews
Comment from scd41
It is an interesting submission. You have very intelligently used all the titles given in the list. Why not? The more the merrier!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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It is an interesting submission. You have very intelligently used all the titles given in the list. Why not? The more the merrier!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the excellent review. It is much appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
This must be the only entry that managed to include all eight titles and still make sense! You've woven them into your ribald story with all the skill of one accustomed to handling ropes!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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This must be the only entry that managed to include all eight titles and still make sense! You've woven them into your ribald story with all the skill of one accustomed to handling ropes!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Wow...Thanks for the great review. I hope that everyone else thinks the way you do, lol.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I feel you did manage to do much more, my friend. Not only was your story entertaining, you also managed to work several Queen titles into the mix, so...
Good stuff! MoFo...? Really (LOL!)
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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I feel you did manage to do much more, my friend. Not only was your story entertaining, you also managed to work several Queen titles into the mix, so...
Good stuff! MoFo...? Really (LOL!)
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Awesome. I hope that everyone else has the same opinion. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
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Yeah, I hope that for you as well, DB.
Comment from GangGreen
Amazing that you managed to use not just one, but all of the titles and still managed to produce a coherent, enjoyable work.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Amazing that you managed to use not just one, but all of the titles and still managed to produce a coherent, enjoyable work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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GG, Thanks for the awesome review and taking the time to read!
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No problem.I didn't know most of the songs until I read the footnotes,so you may be pleased to know that the work stands up on its own.
Comment from LIJ Red
The title fits the prompt but I doubt you will get extra credit for using all the alternate titles in the text. I don't know if I'd thud thickly. Thickly sounds...viscous.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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The title fits the prompt but I doubt you will get extra credit for using all the alternate titles in the text. I don't know if I'd thud thickly. Thickly sounds...viscous.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Lol, one can only hope. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from c_lucas
Some men really get into their fantasies. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Some men really get into their fantasies. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you kindly for a great review.
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You're welcome, DB.
Comment from livelylinda
DerivedBetter: well, it certainly is original . . . I wouldn't have thought of going to that place . . . usually with one of these really short stories, there is a surprise twist in the end. If you have one here, I missed it. livelylinda
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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DerivedBetter: well, it certainly is original . . . I wouldn't have thought of going to that place . . . usually with one of these really short stories, there is a surprise twist in the end. If you have one here, I missed it. livelylinda
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the excellent review it is much appreciated.
Comment from Drew Delaney
You got them all in there. That might be the beginning of a new series of contests. LOL Well done. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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You got them all in there. That might be the beginning of a new series of contests. LOL Well done. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Drew, thanks for the great review. That would be an awesome new contest. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from mjac777
Excellent write! You gave an interesting story and went way above the contest rules to deliver all 8 titles.
This is a great contender for the contest.
Innuendo seems an unlikely safe word - however, given the contest confines poetic license is appropriate here.
Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Excellent write! You gave an interesting story and went way above the contest rules to deliver all 8 titles.
This is a great contender for the contest.
Innuendo seems an unlikely safe word - however, given the contest confines poetic license is appropriate here.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Mjac, thanks for the awesome review and encouragement, it is much appreciated.
Comment from Titan Black
You were very creative, in covering all of
the bases on this one. But your carelessness
about the rules of this contest stops
you from winning... and the crazy part about
that, is I don't think you really care anyway.
But your tying most of their given subjects into
one was great. But you should have stuck to just
one. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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You were very creative, in covering all of
the bases on this one. But your carelessness
about the rules of this contest stops
you from winning... and the crazy part about
that, is I don't think you really care anyway.
But your tying most of their given subjects into
one was great. But you should have stuck to just
one. Keep writing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Titan Black, thanks for the excellent review, but I beg to differ. I only used one song in the title. The rest is all just coincidence (wink, wink), that's where the title took me.
