Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting. That was got murder, or fake accident. I like that the killer gave reasons, so the guy wouldn't die not knowing. Shame about the redhead though. Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Yes, it's always good to know why your dear old dad is having your butt dropped down an elevator shaft, Lance. I'd sure like to know. Lionel should have kept his mouth shut and not mentioned the family business to Marcia, his girlfriend, at all. It might have gone okay for the both of them then.

Thanks so much for the review, my friend.:}

Comment from Erik McGinley

Excellent

Well ...

Hell in purgatory is not hell in hell.

I'd say prayers for the other guy but obviously he pressed the H button on daddy's little boy ;)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

I'd have to agree with you there, Erik, heh-heh...

Thanks for the review, buddy!:D

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I don't like violent stories, but it was well written, sharp dialogue and well drawn characters. The story read well, just didn't like the end, scary! Good luck in the contest. Faye

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks, Faye, and I tried to keep it as bloodless and violent- free as possible, given the topic I had to deal with.

I appreciate your thoughtful review.:)