Rain is Falling
quatrains in 7/7/7/7149 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! Loved the rhyming in this poem! The author's words are delightful, creative and filled with childhood fun! The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Excellent Poem! Loved the rhyming in this poem! The author's words are delightful, creative and filled with childhood fun! The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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harmony, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
What a lovely and fun description of a rainstorm, Brooke! I especially like your use of the word, "plop." It's a great description of the sound of huge drops of raining hitting the ground.
Sawyer must absolutely love this poem -- one more to add to his list of favorites. Your alliteration is wonderful, adding to the flow of your words.
Thank you for sharing yet another wonderful poem, Brooke. Take care. Alana
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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What a lovely and fun description of a rainstorm, Brooke! I especially like your use of the word, "plop." It's a great description of the sound of huge drops of raining hitting the ground.
Sawyer must absolutely love this poem -- one more to add to his list of favorites. Your alliteration is wonderful, adding to the flow of your words.
Thank you for sharing yet another wonderful poem, Brooke. Take care. Alana
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Alana :-) He is off on a one week vacation to Banff - can't wait for pictures! :-) Brooke
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:) You are welcome, Brooke! Alana
Comment from lynglyng
This poem is so well written. I felt like I was reading it out a book at Barnes and Noble. You are so talented and gifted. I am fascinated with the rain and I remember being fascinated as a child. I loved the way grandpa is so technical and grandma encourages the kids to dream. Thank you for sharing, blessings, LyngLyng
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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This poem is so well written. I felt like I was reading it out a book at Barnes and Noble. You are so talented and gifted. I am fascinated with the rain and I remember being fascinated as a child. I loved the way grandpa is so technical and grandma encourages the kids to dream. Thank you for sharing, blessings, LyngLyng
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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lynglyng, thank you so much for your encouraging and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from NicciFaye
Superbly beautiful! I am not a child and i am smiling from ear to ear. Of course this is a winner! Creativity and beautifully written.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Superbly beautiful! I am not a child and i am smiling from ear to ear. Of course this is a winner! Creativity and beautifully written.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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NicciFaye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Craigitar
This is a winner, Brooke! What kid wouldn't smile at all the vivid imagery, fun with numbers and possibility that gold comes from worms? Good luck with the contest. Craig.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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This is a winner, Brooke! What kid wouldn't smile at all the vivid imagery, fun with numbers and possibility that gold comes from worms? Good luck with the contest. Craig.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Craig, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your review and kind contest wishes. Brooke
Comment from hifein
brooke when is the book being published. this is another delightful product from an imaginative poetic mind. look forward to your publication and more here. best, hi
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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brooke when is the book being published. this is another delightful product from an imaginative poetic mind. look forward to your publication and more here. best, hi
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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hifein, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
At the point when the rain stopped, Brooke,
I actually sensed a shift in the poem.
I can't find it mechanically, but you seemed to
insert a 'rest' between the third and forth verses.
I felt it before I read it.
Are you a witch?
Really, Brooke this is a delightful poem. Publish.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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At the point when the rain stopped, Brooke,
I actually sensed a shift in the poem.
I can't find it mechanically, but you seemed to
insert a 'rest' between the third and forth verses.
I felt it before I read it.
Are you a witch?
Really, Brooke this is a delightful poem. Publish.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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A witch. That sounds like so much fun. I wonder if there's somewhere I can sign up and find fellow witches :-) Thank you so very much, my encouraging and generous and entertaining and talented friend :-) Brooke
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Sure, all the witches go out and dance naked in the woods every full moon. Uh, that's what I've heard. I've never watched. Who told you I watched? No. Never. Once.
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naked? I have to get naked in public? there is always something...
Comment from fastdigits
What always makes you stand out
is that you entertain with your
writings, they tell stories in so
many different forums, and each
one is a delight to read
You say quatrains of 7/7,7/7
technically they fall as true as
the raindrops you have written
of.
Well done
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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What always makes you stand out
is that you entertain with your
writings, they tell stories in so
many different forums, and each
one is a delight to read
You say quatrains of 7/7,7/7
technically they fall as true as
the raindrops you have written
of.
Well done
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so much for your gracious and encouraging comments :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
I like the description of dandelions as gold. This is a marvelous poem for children. It teaches them how to count,yet is full of whimsy and imagination. You also have a strong steady beat that makes this poem almost a song that children can sing.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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I like the description of dandelions as gold. This is a marvelous poem for children. It teaches them how to count,yet is full of whimsy and imagination. You also have a strong steady beat that makes this poem almost a song that children can sing.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Elaine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from juliaSjames
Impeccable meter, good rhyme and delightful word choice (plop!) make this a charming story poem - complete with characters!
I haven't read the other entries; but I think this write must be a contender.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Impeccable meter, good rhyme and delightful word choice (plop!) make this a charming story poem - complete with characters!
I haven't read the other entries; but I think this write must be a contender.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Julia, thank you so much :-) Brooke
