Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "The Chase in the Forest & Yeti?"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
NOw who is the stranger in the cave behind them? A miner? He must know another entrance/exit, so they won't be blown up after all. Of course you can't blow up the Bard.. that would be suicide. :)
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NOw who is the stranger in the cave behind them? A miner? He must know another entrance/exit, so they won't be blown up after all. Of course you can't blow up the Bard.. that would be suicide. :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
Awww hehe we are on the run again ha! Good work mate. Got me in there for sure. Some spags/ questions now ok!
The money is on the run. Our heroes (hero's) or (heroes are?)trapped in a dangerous mine. Control is breaking down
though(-t) there was no confidence
Ok I got all the chapters of my book on Word now and I put labels for the Word files on the FS Chapters. Gonna open it all up for reviewing real soon plenty of carrots on offer as well. Heading for the big final edit and adding the Fig Nunmbers for my pictures for the published book.
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Awww hehe we are on the run again ha! Good work mate. Got me in there for sure. Some spags/ questions now ok!
The money is on the run. Our heroes (hero's) or (heroes are?)trapped in a dangerous mine. Control is breaking down
though(-t) there was no confidence
Ok I got all the chapters of my book on Word now and I put labels for the Word files on the FS Chapters. Gonna open it all up for reviewing real soon plenty of carrots on offer as well. Heading for the big final edit and adding the Fig Nunmbers for my pictures for the published book.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from James Dooney
heheh yes the yeti is quite a crazy thing indeed. You need cops and all to guard and be on the look out for it ! Very well done here !
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heheh yes the yeti is quite a crazy thing indeed. You need cops and all to guard and be on the look out for it ! Very well done here !
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
