Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "The Chase in the Forest & Yeti?"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
13 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
I suppose greed and vengeance are both very powerful drivers, but together, Barry has a lot of motivation. This is another fine and well crafted chapter.
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I suppose greed and vengeance are both very powerful drivers, but together, Barry has a lot of motivation. This is another fine and well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
i thought mikey this was an outstanding picture in words greed of the restless soul seeks the grail of gold. Eternity calls, but the lost miner cannot answer. His soul burns in the smelting pot.very beautifully penned excellent piece of reading dear friend
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i thought mikey this was an outstanding picture in words greed of the restless soul seeks the grail of gold. Eternity calls, but the lost miner cannot answer. His soul burns in the smelting pot.very beautifully penned excellent piece of reading dear friend
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
Comment from l.raven
Good one Michael...love this chapter...and I love Bards toothpick...LOL...now go get Petticoat...and save my Bard...LOL...ya know I love it...very well written story...Luff Linda xxoo love
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Good one Michael...love this chapter...and I love Bards toothpick...LOL...now go get Petticoat...and save my Bard...LOL...ya know I love it...very well written story...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
I can see I'm reading backwards as I reviewed the next chapter prior to reading this one. that being said, I liked the way you set up the dark figure sitting at the table. Added so much intrigue that could not but otherwise turn the page to read on. Loren
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I can see I'm reading backwards as I reviewed the next chapter prior to reading this one. that being said, I liked the way you set up the dark figure sitting at the table. Added so much intrigue that could not but otherwise turn the page to read on. Loren
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from adewpearl
headed for the smoke-filled scene - add the hyphen
excellent dialogue that conveys intense emotions well
lots of dramatic action that holds the reader's attention
Brooke
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headed for the smoke-filled scene - add the hyphen
excellent dialogue that conveys intense emotions well
lots of dramatic action that holds the reader's attention
Brooke
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Possibly a mine prospector. The tunnels, catacombs would be a good place to take shelter from the elements. The Bard's imagination is big.he thinks of a Yeti. So we wait to see who this mystery man is? Maybe the person of interest is a fugitive escaping justice, fleeing from the law. An escaped convict, there are many possibilities. Meanwhile the manhunt is going down. Barry won't let that doubloon escape. His madness is fueled by greed. Grammar looks shipshape. Count you gold nugget, outlaw. HUMOR Wackydo...
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Possibly a mine prospector. The tunnels, catacombs would be a good place to take shelter from the elements. The Bard's imagination is big.he thinks of a Yeti. So we wait to see who this mystery man is? Maybe the person of interest is a fugitive escaping justice, fleeing from the law. An escaped convict, there are many possibilities. Meanwhile the manhunt is going down. Barry won't let that doubloon escape. His madness is fueled by greed. Grammar looks shipshape. Count you gold nugget, outlaw. HUMOR Wackydo...
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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The answer is coming in about ten minutes or so!!! Glad you liked this one. Fun to write. I'm letting the Bard say whatever he wants!! A crazy chapter on the way in a few minutes. The mystery man is identified. SURPRISE!!!!! Thanks for the great review and all the stars. We likes them.... yes, my precioussssss
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You deserve the nuggets. You work 24/7, it seems. Dedicated. enjoy your spoils.
Comment from nordicgirl
I think I know who that is in the mine. It is Petticoat, isn't it! Bard finds petticoat and then entices Barry into the trap. Oh yeah! Ha. We'll see. A great action pcacked chapter. We are set up for the delivery. Carry on!!!
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I think I know who that is in the mine. It is Petticoat, isn't it! Bard finds petticoat and then entices Barry into the trap. Oh yeah! Ha. We'll see. A great action pcacked chapter. We are set up for the delivery. Carry on!!!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
Great place to stop. There are so many hidden individuals in the world that only on occasion are discovered. Can't wait to learn who this one is.
One little boo boo
"Shh. Shh. Everyone quiet. Shh. Do you (here) that?" --should be (hear)
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Great place to stop. There are so many hidden individuals in the world that only on occasion are discovered. Can't wait to learn who this one is.
One little boo boo
"Shh. Shh. Everyone quiet. Shh. Do you (here) that?" --should be (hear)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
An attempt to stop from blowing the main entrance to the mind has been stopped. Barry is after his money. SO are the cops. They discover another human being in the mind. He had to get there somehow. I love the strain. Hope it is time for the FBI. Great work.
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An attempt to stop from blowing the main entrance to the mind has been stopped. Barry is after his money. SO are the cops. They discover another human being in the mind. He had to get there somehow. I love the strain. Hope it is time for the FBI. Great work.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
There was I expecting a yeti to be seated at the table! Incompetent officers let the Sergeant get away and Barry is in pursuit. We shall see who gets the cash. I hope the mine is not blown up, but you wouldn't do that! Interesting chapter, drawing to a close? Enjoyable as always. Faye
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There was I expecting a yeti to be seated at the table! Incompetent officers let the Sergeant get away and Barry is in pursuit. We shall see who gets the cash. I hope the mine is not blown up, but you wouldn't do that! Interesting chapter, drawing to a close? Enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
