Wrath of Sins
Something astrological2 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 form and this contest
A 5/7/5 poem is only three lines long
The first line consists of five syllables
The second line uses seven syllables
The third line also consists of five syllables, like the first
You create a powerful scenario as you imagine the final moment of our world
The 4 rating is just because of the form break
Brooke
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You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 form and this contest
A 5/7/5 poem is only three lines long
The first line consists of five syllables
The second line uses seven syllables
The third line also consists of five syllables, like the first
You create a powerful scenario as you imagine the final moment of our world
The 4 rating is just because of the form break
Brooke
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
Comment from Trybuck
This in no way meets
Requirements for the contest
Think you should revise
The above is what a 5-7-5 looks like -- Revise yours and I'll come take another look, Buck
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This in no way meets
Requirements for the contest
Think you should revise
The above is what a 5-7-5 looks like -- Revise yours and I'll come take another look, Buck
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
