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haiku ( God's garden of souls )

We are all brothers and sisters to our Father

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Comment from Jean Lutz
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Such a beautiful way to describe humanity. May we all blossom to the fullest without warring with one another. I wish you well with your entry.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

you follow the contest prompt

your few words allow the reader to see we are all the same in God's eyes

good visual

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much!
reply by Smoothiecool on 25-Aug-2014
    welcome...SC
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I couldn't have said it better myself, this has me jealous that I didn't write it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
    Your lovely complement really made my day. Thank you so much!
Comment from seaglass
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I have always though of the wonderful diversity of humanity is like the diversity of the flower garden. This paints this idea of varied but equal in a lovely metaphor.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Trybuck
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We are all a part of the same garden, yet each one is totally different than another; but those differences blended together makes one special spice.

Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Kaila Mari
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Your haiku is well written and follows prompt entry instructions. The message you as the author convey in 16 words is very deep and leads reader to do soul-searching. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
    Thanks so much!