haiku ( God's garden of souls )
We are all brothers and sisters to our Father6 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Such a beautiful way to describe humanity. May we all blossom to the fullest without warring with one another. I wish you well with your entry.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
Such a beautiful way to describe humanity. May we all blossom to the fullest without warring with one another. I wish you well with your entry.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt
your few words allow the reader to see we are all the same in God's eyes
good visual
cheers smoothiecool
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt
your few words allow the reader to see we are all the same in God's eyes
good visual
cheers smoothiecool
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much!
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welcome...SC
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I couldn't have said it better myself, this has me jealous that I didn't write it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I couldn't have said it better myself, this has me jealous that I didn't write it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Your lovely complement really made my day. Thank you so much!
Comment from seaglass
I have always though of the wonderful diversity of humanity is like the diversity of the flower garden. This paints this idea of varied but equal in a lovely metaphor.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
I have always though of the wonderful diversity of humanity is like the diversity of the flower garden. This paints this idea of varied but equal in a lovely metaphor.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Trybuck
We are all a part of the same garden, yet each one is totally different than another; but those differences blended together makes one special spice.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
We are all a part of the same garden, yet each one is totally different than another; but those differences blended together makes one special spice.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Kaila Mari
Your haiku is well written and follows prompt entry instructions. The message you as the author convey in 16 words is very deep and leads reader to do soul-searching. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
Your haiku is well written and follows prompt entry instructions. The message you as the author convey in 16 words is very deep and leads reader to do soul-searching. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much!