Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 " Elysian Fields"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from GracieAnn
deepwater, this poem has such depth of feeling and excellent phrasing. Not one clichéd phrase, all very original and superbly done as in The beast we have tempered today, and all young lost hope we bury their shells. Moving and powerful. :0 GracieAnn
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deepwater, this poem has such depth of feeling and excellent phrasing. Not one clichéd phrase, all very original and superbly done as in The beast we have tempered today, and all young lost hope we bury their shells. Moving and powerful. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you Gracie for this
Gary
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Wonderful recap of wastefulness of human and material resources in executing senseless wars. Unfortunately, man never learned or has bluntly refused to show remorse for this senselessness.
ola thomas
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Wonderful recap of wastefulness of human and material resources in executing senseless wars. Unfortunately, man never learned or has bluntly refused to show remorse for this senselessness.
ola thomas
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you OLA
Comment from royowen
From reports I've read and excerpts from young soldier's diaries, war in the trenches in the first wold war, were absolutely horrific, beyond all imagination, if the men weren't killed their lives were affectively ruined anyway! Well written, in articulate, descriptively expressed, and beautifully penned! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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From reports I've read and excerpts from young soldier's diaries, war in the trenches in the first wold war, were absolutely horrific, beyond all imagination, if the men weren't killed their lives were affectively ruined anyway! Well written, in articulate, descriptively expressed, and beautifully penned! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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thank you for your review Roy
Gary
Comment from LIJ Red
This reminds me of a quote about a scene in Nam-all we did was stay there and die. This brings out the dismal fury of static warfare. Excellent.
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This reminds me of a quote about a scene in Nam-all we did was stay there and die. This brings out the dismal fury of static warfare. Excellent.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you LIJ
Comment from desire333
This poem was so alluring, and beautiful. It had a touch of sadness, because its base off of true events. Thank you very much for sharing!
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This poem was so alluring, and beautiful. It had a touch of sadness, because its base off of true events. Thank you very much for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from Oatmeal
deepwater,
The theme is a tough one. War is not happy ever. All arrangement is fine, smoothly readable, understandable and it leaves pictures in our minds. The flow is good.
There is no SPAG that I could see.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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deepwater,
The theme is a tough one. War is not happy ever. All arrangement is fine, smoothly readable, understandable and it leaves pictures in our minds. The flow is good.
There is no SPAG that I could see.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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thank you Oatmeal
