Pure Fidelity-Without Trust
Romance-Double Acrostic Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
two solid acrostics, side by side for Pure Fidelity and Without Trust
clever formatting
I really like the conversation between the spouse doing the unfounding accusing and the one denying and upset by the lack of trust
you convey the intense emotions of each well as you demonstrate what jealousy can do to tear a relationship apart
Brooke
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two solid acrostics, side by side for Pure Fidelity and Without Trust
clever formatting
I really like the conversation between the spouse doing the unfounding accusing and the one denying and upset by the lack of trust
you convey the intense emotions of each well as you demonstrate what jealousy can do to tear a relationship apart
Brooke
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from lynglyng
Great job spelling out the title of your poem. The main idea was easy to follow and it told a story to the reader. this is a difficult task to accomplish and you did a great job. The colors and pictures you chose really did add to the feel of the poem.
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Great job spelling out the title of your poem. The main idea was easy to follow and it told a story to the reader. this is a difficult task to accomplish and you did a great job. The colors and pictures you chose really did add to the feel of the poem.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
