Pure Fidelity-Without Trust
Romance-Double Acrostic Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from amanda98653
This is phenomenal and flawless. I'm SO glad you won.
Jealousy is one of the negative symptoms of insecurity. Lack of communication makes things worse.
Definitely an exceptional piece
Hugs
Amanda
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This is phenomenal and flawless. I'm SO glad you won.
Jealousy is one of the negative symptoms of insecurity. Lack of communication makes things worse.
Definitely an exceptional piece
Hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
Comment from Aiona
I enjoyed the structure that you chose! Very original use of acrostic. Or at least *I* have never seen it used that way. The poem itself is wonderful in its structure. 'Course anecdotally, I have never seen a jealous partner in a relationship that didn't have some very good reason to be suspicious. But that is another poem.
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I enjoyed the structure that you chose! Very original use of acrostic. Or at least *I* have never seen it used that way. The poem itself is wonderful in its structure. 'Course anecdotally, I have never seen a jealous partner in a relationship that didn't have some very good reason to be suspicious. But that is another poem.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Congratulations on your contest win, Mikey. I've known people like that; they undermine their own happiness and sabotage their lives. Very sad. You did a super job capturing that personality type. Very well done.
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Congratulations on your contest win, Mikey. I've known people like that; they undermine their own happiness and sabotage their lives. Very sad. You did a super job capturing that personality type. Very well done.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow, a double acrostic, with a paradox thrown in for good measure, and an outstanding, well presented poem with a pertinent message. It seems to be speaking from the male vs. female perspective. I found it quite interesting that the female was the one who felt wronged. Quite often, it is just as common the other way around...
Nicely done, excellent work, no matter whose side your on, LOL...
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Wow, a double acrostic, with a paradox thrown in for good measure, and an outstanding, well presented poem with a pertinent message. It seems to be speaking from the male vs. female perspective. I found it quite interesting that the female was the one who felt wronged. Quite often, it is just as common the other way around...
Nicely done, excellent work, no matter whose side your on, LOL...
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is impressive, meeting the challenge from bot the negative and positive direction. nothing is more miserable than trying to love someone who is mistrusting.
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This is impressive, meeting the challenge from bot the negative and positive direction. nothing is more miserable than trying to love someone who is mistrusting.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I'm blown away! Wow-wow-wow-wow! I'm infatuated with that painting. That is art! i t has vivid colors, how nice. Did that picture cost? Damn--Mikey! You got two distinct personalites conflicting here. It is out of this world!!!!! I can't get my eyes off this double acrostic. This is a double acrostic, what a bonus. It meets the committee rules. The presentation blows me away! Dang! A riddle is asked and it is answered on the exact line sequence. What a piece of art. This should be against the law. Just joking. I never seen no acrostic like this one before since I been on this site. No bullshit. I will bookcase this unit. I will read it numerous times. This is art!!! I bury me head in the sand. This masterpiece is worth eight stars!!!!! I do not kid. Hope others can see that! I only got five stars. That is an insult, I realize, I have nothing else to give. I'm speecless, Mikey. You have come up with something that staggers the human mind. count your doubloon and good luck in the contest. wackydo, do loco
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I'm blown away! Wow-wow-wow-wow! I'm infatuated with that painting. That is art! i t has vivid colors, how nice. Did that picture cost? Damn--Mikey! You got two distinct personalites conflicting here. It is out of this world!!!!! I can't get my eyes off this double acrostic. This is a double acrostic, what a bonus. It meets the committee rules. The presentation blows me away! Dang! A riddle is asked and it is answered on the exact line sequence. What a piece of art. This should be against the law. Just joking. I never seen no acrostic like this one before since I been on this site. No bullshit. I will bookcase this unit. I will read it numerous times. This is art!!! I bury me head in the sand. This masterpiece is worth eight stars!!!!! I do not kid. Hope others can see that! I only got five stars. That is an insult, I realize, I have nothing else to give. I'm speecless, Mikey. You have come up with something that staggers the human mind. count your doubloon and good luck in the contest. wackydo, do loco
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
I love your author notes and believe them to be true.....when someone mistrusts they won't accept the love.....
Well written acrostic....
God bless
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I love your author notes and believe them to be true.....when someone mistrusts they won't accept the love.....
Well written acrostic....
God bless
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
I would suggest that the dash be replaced by VS because this appears to be a type of sparring poem. Right cannot admit to wrong & definitely, wrong will never admit to being wrong for (?) always assume they are right at the Right's expense accusing them of wrong.
Great poem & we wish you well in the contest.
Acrostic poem & definitely a tough one.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
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I would suggest that the dash be replaced by VS because this appears to be a type of sparring poem. Right cannot admit to wrong & definitely, wrong will never admit to being wrong for (?) always assume they are right at the Right's expense accusing them of wrong.
Great poem & we wish you well in the contest.
Acrostic poem & definitely a tough one.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
An all too often turn of events when the man refuses to see his wife(or girlfriend) as honest as the day is long and fears if he doesn't find fault in the way they live he will lose her or better yet commit suicide for feeling so worthless.
Charlene
*But then there is the flip side to that coin as well.
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An all too often turn of events when the man refuses to see his wife(or girlfriend) as honest as the day is long and fears if he doesn't find fault in the way they live he will lose her or better yet commit suicide for feeling so worthless.
Charlene
*But then there is the flip side to that coin as well.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the lack of trust that breaks a relationship. I enjoyed your double acrostic. good luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the lack of trust that breaks a relationship. I enjoyed your double acrostic. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
