In Stillness
In stillness we find peace......6 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
The picture is adorable and goes perfect with your poem. Funny how babies renew a part of us that nothing else can. Great job and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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The picture is adorable and goes perfect with your poem. Funny how babies renew a part of us that nothing else can. Great job and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Saucey
Awwwwwwwww this beautiful write the pic grabs your heart causing you to read further down the page, best wishes, I appreciate this gem, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Awwwwwwwww this beautiful write the pic grabs your heart causing you to read further down the page, best wishes, I appreciate this gem, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
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The baby so adorable.
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Yes, this baby is just beautiful and I couldn't resist using the picture for this poem....
Comment from rrabinow
Wonderful acrostic poem that you wrote for this prompt. I like the rhyme scheme that you use. Great description as well. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Wonderful acrostic poem that you wrote for this prompt. I like the rhyme scheme that you use. Great description as well. Best of luck.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and exceptional comments. Hope you are doing well - have good night!
Comment from sweetthanesue
yes stillness and peace are good and i love starting my day in silent prayer....nice read ..only small jag "Endless gifts bestowed on thy...just didnt flow as well with the rest..apart from that nice verse....sue
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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yes stillness and peace are good and i love starting my day in silent prayer....nice read ..only small jag "Endless gifts bestowed on thy...just didnt flow as well with the rest..apart from that nice verse....sue
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for this excellent review and your exceptional
comments. Thank you for you suggestion - I just couldn't come up with anything. I value when a good reviewer gives me feedback. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from kiwijenny
This is soooooooo precious....so sweet and the most perfect innocent stillness...a baby in my arms and rocking is the sweetest peace on earth
Well done I like this acrostic
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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This is soooooooo precious....so sweet and the most perfect innocent stillness...a baby in my arms and rocking is the sweetest peace on earth
Well done I like this acrostic
God bless
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Charlene0513
A lovely poem expressing the true gift given to us from above.
Had tenderness coupled with solemnity.
Nice flow with a descriptive image to portray its innocence.
Charlene
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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A lovely poem expressing the true gift given to us from above.
Had tenderness coupled with solemnity.
Nice flow with a descriptive image to portray its innocence.
Charlene
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
