Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

We just started having summer weather so I hope we have a little while before it gets cold and snowy. We had a rough year last year and I'm told to expect the same this year. I hope they're all wrong but only time will tell. Great job with this and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. The winds blow in old man winter. The wind blows the leaves of the trees. It blows the angry waves on to the shore. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014

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Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. I like how your poem flows from line to line. I like that you have the first letter of each line in a color to have it stand out. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I like this acrostic...and the new color for the beginning of each sentence....fall and winter colors too....the picture reminds me of figures on the Sistine chapel...well written...especially like stories told that depict winter...it's cuddle up and read time when the wind blows
God bless

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the winds that change the landscape with scattered leaves and bursts of color. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thank you