A Golden Coverlet
quatrains in abab rhyme137 total reviews
Comment from Pyrrho
My first thought is: viola, another of the rare folks on Fan Story who have the crafts of rhyme & meter well developed and also can offer interesting content. Ha. I should have known it was you.
You asked the right questions, you just did not ask the correct entity.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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My first thought is: viola, another of the rare folks on Fan Story who have the crafts of rhyme & meter well developed and also can offer interesting content. Ha. I should have known it was you.
You asked the right questions, you just did not ask the correct entity.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Pyrrho :-) Brooke
Comment from amada
This is a lovely Quatrain, "a woven golden coverlet" Such a precious thought, I see the sun and the fairies busy at work, maybe the moon borrowed her sparkle!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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This is a lovely Quatrain, "a woven golden coverlet" Such a precious thought, I see the sun and the fairies busy at work, maybe the moon borrowed her sparkle!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
Asking, who's responsible for nature's beauty? The sun was viewed as a God by some tribes. A golden coverlet will make one stop and think. Great rhythm throughout. Superb write! Les
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Asking, who's responsible for nature's beauty? The sun was viewed as a God by some tribes. A golden coverlet will make one stop and think. Great rhythm throughout. Superb write! Les
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Les, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from DALLAS01
Sorry I do not have a six to bestow on this beautifully written mystery. The imagery is enchanting. I could envision magic being scattered through the voice of whimsy.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Sorry I do not have a six to bestow on this beautifully written mystery. The imagery is enchanting. I could envision magic being scattered through the voice of whimsy.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Dallas :-) Brooke
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Comment from evilynne
What a beautiful descriptive poem. The picture is a stunning and a perfect accompaniment to your lovely work. I enjoyed it a great deal.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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What a beautiful descriptive poem. The picture is a stunning and a perfect accompaniment to your lovely work. I enjoyed it a great deal.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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evi, thank you so very much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
Amazing poem inspired by a beautiful picture. I read your poem twice because I enjoyed how the rhythm almost made it sound as if it were a song. Superb!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Amazing poem inspired by a beautiful picture. I read your poem twice because I enjoyed how the rhythm almost made it sound as if it were a song. Superb!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Cajungirl, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem. :-) Brooke
Comment from BCScot
A wonderful piece to go with the image, I liked the format wherein you asked the question to a variety of deities etc. We sometimes have to just accept beauty for what it is without asking questions eh?
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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A wonderful piece to go with the image, I liked the format wherein you asked the question to a variety of deities etc. We sometimes have to just accept beauty for what it is without asking questions eh?
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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BC, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
Rhyming 'coverlet' with 'woven it' is just brilliant.
I wondered if you were writing about your beloved dandelions, Brooke? From the picture - perhaps not.
Lovely - as always!
Sonali
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Rhyming 'coverlet' with 'woven it' is just brilliant.
I wondered if you were writing about your beloved dandelions, Brooke? From the picture - perhaps not.
Lovely - as always!
Sonali
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Sonali - the photo struck me as I was looking at the first page of fan art, but I was thinking of pretty much any field of golden flowers, including my beloved dandelions :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
What a brilliant way to see the world, Brooke, and I think your idea of looking at it that way in verse is superb. It is a most unique take on a beautiful yellow flower. I enjoyed reading your superbly written poem because I always enjoy the regular rhythm and rhyme of your pieces, Giddy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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What a brilliant way to see the world, Brooke, and I think your idea of looking at it that way in verse is superb. It is a most unique take on a beautiful yellow flower. I enjoyed reading your superbly written poem because I always enjoy the regular rhythm and rhyme of your pieces, Giddy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thanks so very much, Giddy :-) Brooke
Comment from Taffspride
Sometimes a poem touches the right note, and others uplift the spirit.
This was simply beautiful Brooke, and if I may I should like to copy and keep it in my memory book to read on those days that I need to be uplifted, since that is what it did to me.
Even reading it aloud could not truly do it justice. It made me think, and remember so many things.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Sometimes a poem touches the right note, and others uplift the spirit.
This was simply beautiful Brooke, and if I may I should like to copy and keep it in my memory book to read on those days that I need to be uplifted, since that is what it did to me.
Even reading it aloud could not truly do it justice. It made me think, and remember so many things.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Ann, thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem. I would be honored if you saved it. :-) Brooke
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Thank you Brooke, I am going to bookcase it, but will copy also for my memory book.
This is a book of poetry, or short stories that have meant a great deal to me over the years. Adding A Golden Coverlet will be a privilege.
Iechyd da
Ann
