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Comment from michaelcahill
It seems like forever since I've reviewed one of your awesome poems. Everytime I go to look at one it is removed it seems. Maybe I'm just buried and unorganized. This is awesome. An ounce. How strange. I love finding out things like that. This is so active and alive. I can feel the battle going on. Wonderful imagery. Great work, mikey
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It seems like forever since I've reviewed one of your awesome poems. Everytime I go to look at one it is removed it seems. Maybe I'm just buried and unorganized. This is awesome. An ounce. How strange. I love finding out things like that. This is so active and alive. I can feel the battle going on. Wonderful imagery. Great work, mikey
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
Comment from mermaids
If winter's still afoot and on a fling are a wonderful two last lines. Sometimes winter is still on a fling,spring arrives and ice and snow linger. Your use of words and smooth flow of words captures the feel of nature and I love the pic of the snow leopard.
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If winter's still afoot and on a fling are a wonderful two last lines. Sometimes winter is still on a fling,spring arrives and ice and snow linger. Your use of words and smooth flow of words captures the feel of nature and I love the pic of the snow leopard.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Goodauthor
Very well written. It flows smoothly from verse to verse. I enjoyed the read. That art was lovely. It went so well with the poem. Winter is one of my favorite seasons.
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Very well written. It flows smoothly from verse to verse. I enjoyed the read. That art was lovely. It went so well with the poem. Winter is one of my favorite seasons.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi MW,
Your flawless meter made this a joy to read. This is my favorite stanza because it produced amazing images. Very well written. Hugs, Lou
All polar bears are black
while in their dens,
'til fur is frosted
white by icy winds.
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Hi MW,
Your flawless meter made this a joy to read. This is my favorite stanza because it produced amazing images. Very well written. Hugs, Lou
All polar bears are black
while in their dens,
'til fur is frosted
white by icy winds.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Moonwillow: What a beautiful poem and photo. Nature is so amazing with each season that God creates and watches over. I like your blue birds sing, Jack Frost, ice floats and the polar bears are black. Well written and a good visual.
flylikeaneagle
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Moonwillow: What a beautiful poem and photo. Nature is so amazing with each season that God creates and watches over. I like your blue birds sing, Jack Frost, ice floats and the polar bears are black. Well written and a good visual.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
A beautiful illustration to enhance your beautiful poem. I am a big fan on poems written about nature, and this one did not let me down, you brought every word to life, with such amazing imagery. A pleasure to read! :) Sandra
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A beautiful illustration to enhance your beautiful poem. I am a big fan on poems written about nature, and this one did not let me down, you brought every word to life, with such amazing imagery. A pleasure to read! :) Sandra
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from DR DIP
lovely words and well written in ABCB rhyme formula it wasn't until your authors notes that I realised it was a snow leopard NOw I see the relevance!
well written as I said thanks for sharing
dip
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lovely words and well written in ABCB rhyme formula it wasn't until your authors notes that I realised it was a snow leopard NOw I see the relevance!
well written as I said thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Artist Dilemma
Extremely good and wonderfully expressed with words that flow all over with coherent descriptions of our beautiful nature.
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Extremely good and wonderfully expressed with words that flow all over with coherent descriptions of our beautiful nature.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from chasennov
ABCB Seasonal Poem "Nature's Dilemma" Nature is in fact a difficult condition to deal with at times. but at the same time a wonderful element. Excellent poem. well done.
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ABCB Seasonal Poem "Nature's Dilemma" Nature is in fact a difficult condition to deal with at times. but at the same time a wonderful element. Excellent poem. well done.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
Comment from Pyrrho
I suspect the ounce weights quite a few ounces.
The subject poem is a delightful query into the complex transition of winter to spring.
I als enjoy your somewhat cavalier freedom with rhyming.
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I suspect the ounce weights quite a few ounces.
The subject poem is a delightful query into the complex transition of winter to spring.
I als enjoy your somewhat cavalier freedom with rhyming.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
