Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Do you hold the power of gods "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Janeyjane
love this poem. Its an easy, clear read, which flows very well. My take on it was if other life forms wanted to visit us, im sure these are some of the questions they would ask. But what would our answer be? I'm sure many of us would be ashamed to reply. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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love this poem. Its an easy, clear read, which flows very well. My take on it was if other life forms wanted to visit us, im sure these are some of the questions they would ask. But what would our answer be? I'm sure many of us would be ashamed to reply. Thanks for sharing
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again thank you for this and the six jane
Comment from skye
This is powerful, with a thoughtful message. Does earth hold war or peace? Earthlings know what we are capable of, but are we achieving the best. Your poem is excellent, filled with wonderful lines and rhymes and a smooth flowing poetic read.
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This is powerful, with a thoughtful message. Does earth hold war or peace? Earthlings know what we are capable of, but are we achieving the best. Your poem is excellent, filled with wonderful lines and rhymes and a smooth flowing poetic read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you skye
Comment from kiwijenny
Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold
Does man hold his child this night to keep him from the cold?
Oh I hope for the good.........Love is a power I hope for the good
God bless...thanks for another thought provoker
God bless
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Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold
Does man hold his child this night to keep him from the cold?
Oh I hope for the good.........Love is a power I hope for the good
God bless...thanks for another thought provoker
God bless
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from Titan Black
Talking about thing outside of the box? Your poetic alliteration was good. And the planetary travel was unique. Nevertheless, your words of wisdom were earth shaking. Keep writing.
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Talking about thing outside of the box? Your poetic alliteration was good. And the planetary travel was unique. Nevertheless, your words of wisdom were earth shaking. Keep writing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from livelylinda
deepwater: this series of poem you are writing are just lovely, thought provoking, a little intense but leaves the reader feeling hopeful. Great work. livelylinda
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deepwater: this series of poem you are writing are just lovely, thought provoking, a little intense but leaves the reader feeling hopeful. Great work. livelylinda
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Well, DeepWater, I wish that I would have saved a six for this one. I will have to give you a five and an IOU for a six! Beautifully done, and awesome picture!
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Well, DeepWater, I wish that I would have saved a six for this one. I will have to give you a five and an IOU for a six! Beautifully done, and awesome picture!
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thank you Linda
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture to complement your poem. See, I stumbled across you again. This poem rhymes and flows well too. I liked the last two lines best.
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Excellent picture to complement your poem. See, I stumbled across you again. This poem rhymes and flows well too. I liked the last two lines best.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you robina
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi deepwater - A well written poem asking a very relevant question for the times we live in. Good rhyming couplets - 'knees/peace' near rhyme. An enjoyable read. Kind regards Dorothy
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Hi deepwater - A well written poem asking a very relevant question for the times we live in. Good rhyming couplets - 'knees/peace' near rhyme. An enjoyable read. Kind regards Dorothy
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thank you Dorothy
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
effective use of questions to engage the reader
good alliteration in make a man
a thoughtful look at human values
Brooke
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solid use of rhyming couplets
effective use of questions to engage the reader
good alliteration in make a man
a thoughtful look at human values
Brooke
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thanks Brooke
Comment from drivenbackward
Good poem, deepwater. I think you did a good job matching these words with such a unique picture -- one I have never seen before. I'm not sure if the message with intended to be disturbing or hopeful, but it got me thinking.
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Good poem, deepwater. I think you did a good job matching these words with such a unique picture -- one I have never seen before. I'm not sure if the message with intended to be disturbing or hopeful, but it got me thinking.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
