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Do not Have

Just cut her down

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Sounds like east Texas during the hottest day know in history. Even dirt would burn. Good strong worded poem. Shalom my friend.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

Comment from lalajovanoski
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I can see the outflow of deep emotion from the heart in this work. An emotion depicting a betrayal of love and trust. Yes, it'd happens and it will continue to happen inasmuch as man's heart construction is not written on his face. Nicely rendered. Exquisitely composed. Love LJ

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014