Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Just glorious imagery.................
Well done.....through planted feet
I spin on Earth's axis..............................
Freeing my wings................
I love it....
God bless

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks:)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

Love the artwork paired with your cleverly crafted Naani, Makes for a stunning presentation, my friend.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you so much Jax. Have a great evening.

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

Very nice Naani for this contest. Beautiful picture, and I love the last line. Forever reaching the light. But, as I look at it now, I am counting 22 syllables. I counted three times and came up with 22. I apologize in advance, if I am incorrect.
(I CHANGED MY SCORE TO FIVE, BECAUSE YOU WERE CORRECT ABOUT THE NAANI COUNT, BUT JUST HAD THE COUNT WRONG IN YOUR AUTHOR NOTES......)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Well, a naani if you read the contest rules has to be between 20 and 25 so either count I am ok. Thank you.

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for changing your rating:)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Lovely words and great imagery in your naani poem, Teresa. I love the thought of spinning causes your wings to open to help,you reach the light. Very nice poem!
Smiles,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks Karyn:)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Awesome picture to compliment your naani poem structure which has the right amount of lines and syllable count. "freeing my wings, forever reaching the light" are great lines. 8-)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you so much:)

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

I am not familiar at all with the naani, but I know what I like, and I like this! You've made wonderful use of imagery. I particularly like the last line:

forever reaching the light

Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Alana

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you Alana:)

reply by acerisestory on 18-Aug-2014

You are welcome. Alana

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Teresa - I am not too familiar with this form of poetry but this one of yours is lovely and sounds right to me. After reading yours I'm wondering if mine is suitable. I've made a reservation. Oh well, nothing ventured... Kind regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Dorothy, I'm sure your naani will be in perfect form. Mine is right as far as syllable & line count but I don't know if they have any other specifics. Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Nice imagery and well chosen words to convey your message. You recreate the aura of the picture well by your words. Super pic and good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you Faye. Your reviews are always appreciated:)

Comment from ronnie k

Exceptional

A positive reminder that poetry is not just what I like but what I love, Tab. I miss you and to read your poet, I find I am right where I want, need and must be. God bless you Ronnie k

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

So good to see you again. Glad to hear you are where you want and need to be. Thank you for the generous rating:)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Teresa;
good luck in this contest poetry for your entry is an excellent one. It is so very expressive and descriptive in its imagery that I could see someone actually taking off their wings and stretching high with her toes and heels are up in the air reaching for the light.
Your home is very imaginative and very ingeniously inventive and superbly creative.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting in May the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you Alex for your always kind reviews:)