Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

Hmm ... not sure what you're implying, TAB. Is this a religious poem? Either way, it's well written and got me thinking.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

It got you thinking so I did my job:) Spiritual and meditative, pulling the energy from the earth and reaching for the light of God. Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

through planted feet
I spin on Earth's axis
freeing my wings
forever reaching the light
Excellent use of alliteration
Perfect syllable count for the form and a strong entry in the contest
All the best

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

Form fits 21 syllables; concept is nice and light gets one to thinking that being earth bound isn't too bad for the spirit soars way up above these heights.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Nice naani...reminding me of a tree--both rooted and reading. Nice closing note. Nice alliteration of F in freeing and forever and consonance of R in all lines, as well as s in this line:

I spin on Earth's axis

Nice one and a lovely presentation as well.

Good luck

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you RD:)

reply by rama devi on 19-Aug-2014

:-))))

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Very nicely done, in a set number of syllables. Not an easy thing to accomplish.

The picture too, adds to the "light."

Thank you for a great posting!

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Yes, I like this. Particularly the notion of
flying as you spin on Earth's axis. Planted feet,
and flying. Yes, that makes sense to me.
Well done.

Best of luck with the Committee.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thank you Lee for the 5 star review:)