Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent artwork to complement your Naani and I liked the well worded message in your poem. Not too many syllables.
Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you Ine for the great review:)

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Teresa, this is a beautiful piece of writing my friend, depicting what I think, is someone struggling to keep their feet on the ground, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you eric for the kind review:)

reply by Eric1 on 19-Aug-2014

You are very welcome Teresa.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi Teresa. Wow, a good entry into this contest. I hope you did well. I like the feet planted on the planet spinning.
I am trying to get back into things...sometimes it is discipline that is needed, no thinking, just time at the keyboard...like shooting baskets over and over.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:) Yes, I guess getting into is just about making yourself do it. Have a great week.

Comment from faragon

Excellent

I think you did a fine job in following the format of the Naani Poem. To me this has sort of a Native American feel to the words you chose and the way you placed them. I think it is a very nice poem!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you so much for the great review:)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

This universe is a crazy place, and planted feet on Earth's axis couldn't be any wilder. Yet, I don't feel like I'm spinning. LOL. A very enjoyable poem. Les

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks Les:)

Comment from Christine B.

Excellent

The positive message is really abundant. Here we are, planted, members of the wide spin, free to act on our impulses and achieve. A lovely write that holds to the mystery!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

NICE POEM.NICE ACCOMPANYING IMAGERY.SEEMS TO HAVE FULFILLED THE SYLLABLE REQUIREMENTS FOR THE NAANI PROMPT.AM NOT SURE I UNDERSTAND THE 'PLANTED FEET'BIT, BUT IT IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM.BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks!

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Stunning artwork Teresa to accompany your clever naani.
Good use of alliteration with feet, freeing and forever.
Especially love last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks Janet:)

Comment from Tegan1311

Excellent

This is a very well written poem and the picture fits it so well. Although it's short, your message is clear and your descriptions are very visual. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem of 21 syllables in 4 lines is in fine naani form
with a reflective tone appropriate for this form
good alliterative pairing of freeing and forever
good assonance in freeing reaching
excellent use of enjambment to make this one continuous thought
Brooke

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you Brooke:)