Reaching the Light
naani46 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are creative, unique, and descriptive.
The artwork is perfect and complimented the theme of the poem.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Excellent poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are creative, unique, and descriptive.
The artwork is perfect and complimented the theme of the poem.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you:)
Comment from Lulube
got me a bit mixed up here by spinning to free your wings to reach the light. Kinda know what you are getting at but a bit confused
lulube
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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got me a bit mixed up here by spinning to free your wings to reach the light. Kinda know what you are getting at but a bit confused
lulube
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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It is a bit spiritual - drawing up the energy from the earth and reaching for the light (God).
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okay, I get it. not trying to be a pill or anything, I'd rather ask when I don't get it than to pretend that I do.
lulube
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Teresa - a lovely Naani, great word choices too. I especially loved your last line...it extends passed time itself I think.
I enjoyed this one and good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Dear Teresa - a lovely Naani, great word choices too. I especially loved your last line...it extends passed time itself I think.
I enjoyed this one and good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thank you Maureen:)
Comment from ArtGal
Teresa, what a wonderful Naani. I love how you worded this, and we must stay in the light to get to where we're going. In dark, we'll stumble and fall. This is really beautifully written, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Teresa, what a wonderful Naani. I love how you worded this, and we must stay in the light to get to where we're going. In dark, we'll stumble and fall. This is really beautifully written, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. . .Sharon
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you Sharon, I always appreciate hearing from you. Hubby doing ok?
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Getting ready for more tests and procedures Friday. Please send prayers, he's still losing weight, so scary...Sharon
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I'll be praying for him.
Comment from Jackarrie
I love this short poem, because it has a profound meaning in it. We are travelling at a very high speed around the sun with our feet planted firmly on the ground. Yes, we are all nurtured by the light of the Sun.
Well written
Good luck in the contest
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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I love this short poem, because it has a profound meaning in it. We are travelling at a very high speed around the sun with our feet planted firmly on the ground. Yes, we are all nurtured by the light of the Sun.
Well written
Good luck in the contest
Mary
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you Mary for the great review and the good luck wishes:)
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi Theresa,
There's something about the lines of this little poem that sent shivers up my spine - particularly the last line.
Hope you win, dear!
Love,
Sonali xxx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Hi Theresa,
There's something about the lines of this little poem that sent shivers up my spine - particularly the last line.
Hope you win, dear!
Love,
Sonali xxx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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wow, that is quite a compliment. I'm glad it touched something inside of you. Thanks for the great review sonali.
Comment from Titan Black
I was really feeling this poem. For, it screams: "Free your mind, and the rest will follow". A lot of the times a lot of people choose to stand in their own way, not realizing what they are doing. And you did a good job in counteracting that stereo type. Nice job. Keep writing
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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I was really feeling this poem. For, it screams: "Free your mind, and the rest will follow". A lot of the times a lot of people choose to stand in their own way, not realizing what they are doing. And you did a good job in counteracting that stereo type. Nice job. Keep writing
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Yes! You are one of the few who totally got this piece! Thanks for the great review:)
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Your welcome. And don't forget to stop by my page, and check out and rate some of my poetry. And if you like what you read, click on that "Fan" button. For, this all about the networking. So, stay connected.
Comment from c_lucas
Let your light shine; it will keep you from stumbling. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspirational read.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Let your light shine; it will keep you from stumbling. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspirational read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks Charlie:)
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You're welcome, Teresa. Charlie
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Teresa,
I love the image you chose, but love your words even more because I imagined myself actually clinging to the axis and spinning with the earth. Wow, what an adventure.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Hi Teresa,
I love the image you chose, but love your words even more because I imagined myself actually clinging to the axis and spinning with the earth. Wow, what an adventure.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you could visualize it Lou!
Comment from Domino 2
This is a very thought-provoking naani, Teresa.
It's sure got my limited number of brain-cells working overtime. :-)
I think it's often best to allow the reader their own interpretation, rather than make the theme obvious.
Maybe you're inferring death in the end, when one is freed of Earth's restrictive gravity, and moves onto greater things.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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This is a very thought-provoking naani, Teresa.
It's sure got my limited number of brain-cells working overtime. :-)
I think it's often best to allow the reader their own interpretation, rather than make the theme obvious.
Maybe you're inferring death in the end, when one is freed of Earth's restrictive gravity, and moves onto greater things.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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More of a spiritual poem - being energize by the earth and reaching for the light of God. Thanks Ray for the great review!
