~We've Weathered Storms...~
For my beautiful wife, Keresna, on our anniversary.99 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
good use of mono-rhyming in each quatrain
excellent use of enjambment to create flow from line to line
good use of the storm imagery throughout
a beautifully romantic/loving poem - your wife is a lucky woman :-) Brooke
Is that a portrait of her?
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good use of mono-rhyming in each quatrain
excellent use of enjambment to create flow from line to line
good use of the storm imagery throughout
a beautifully romantic/loving poem - your wife is a lucky woman :-) Brooke
Is that a portrait of her?
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from mumanoon
This was a beautifully craft and cleverly written tribute to your wife of 20 Years! I had a lump in my through and a tear in my eye as I read your exquisite verses....What a lucky woman! I sure she must have shed a tear when she read it also. Best Wishes, to you both! E
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This was a beautifully craft and cleverly written tribute to your wife of 20 Years! I had a lump in my through and a tear in my eye as I read your exquisite verses....What a lucky woman! I sure she must have shed a tear when she read it also. Best Wishes, to you both! E
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from acerisestory
This is a heartwarming and heartfelt poem in tribute to your beautiful wife, Dean! Very romantic, indeed. She's a lucky woman to have a guy who adores her so.
Your poem has a beautiful rhythm and rhyme. I like your alliteration with the repetition of the "s" sounds, and also your repetition of "east," "west," and through on the endings of the first and last lines of the first three stanzas. Nice!
Thanks for sharing, Dean. Happy Anniversary! Alana
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This is a heartwarming and heartfelt poem in tribute to your beautiful wife, Dean! Very romantic, indeed. She's a lucky woman to have a guy who adores her so.
Your poem has a beautiful rhythm and rhyme. I like your alliteration with the repetition of the "s" sounds, and also your repetition of "east," "west," and through on the endings of the first and last lines of the first three stanzas. Nice!
Thanks for sharing, Dean. Happy Anniversary! Alana
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Janeyjane
This is so heart touching and lovely to read. Such a nice flow of words and the music compliments it perfectly. What a wonderful gift for an anniversary. Thanks for sharing.
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This is so heart touching and lovely to read. Such a nice flow of words and the music compliments it perfectly. What a wonderful gift for an anniversary. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from tbacha58
WOW, WOW, She is so beautiful, so elegant, now I know why your poem is unbelievable but true. Amazing Dean, there is so much change in your writings, especially this one, its so special, and may God always grant you both a beautiful life, now and forever. You are such a writer Dean, you keep showing your strength with great power. Keep writing, and late Happy Anniversary to both of you. Love Terry xoxo
My virtual stars from Montreal will shine above you. xoxo
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WOW, WOW, She is so beautiful, so elegant, now I know why your poem is unbelievable but true. Amazing Dean, there is so much change in your writings, especially this one, its so special, and may God always grant you both a beautiful life, now and forever. You are such a writer Dean, you keep showing your strength with great power. Keep writing, and late Happy Anniversary to both of you. Love Terry xoxo
My virtual stars from Montreal will shine above you. xoxo
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing your touching anniversary poem written for your wife, Keresna. I've finally conceded that there is a lot of truth to the saying, "Behind every good man is a good woman." Mine, carries a whip and chains. Great job. :-)
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Thanks for sharing your touching anniversary poem written for your wife, Keresna. I've finally conceded that there is a lot of truth to the saying, "Behind every good man is a good woman." Mine, carries a whip and chains. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from skye
Personal tributes are such a beautiful method of conveying love and gratitude.
Your poem is smooth, filled with wonderful rhymes and lines and say a liftime of uplifting messages.
Excellent.
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Personal tributes are such a beautiful method of conveying love and gratitude.
Your poem is smooth, filled with wonderful rhymes and lines and say a liftime of uplifting messages.
Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
This gave me joy and always will that you love your wife and always will. That in this day and time when people choose not to weather storms you gave my heart a boost.
God bless dear man.....and there were no screams yay
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This gave me joy and always will that you love your wife and always will. That in this day and time when people choose not to weather storms you gave my heart a boost.
God bless dear man.....and there were no screams yay
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Spitfire
What a lovely tribute to your wife. (Bet you get some tonight L0L). She's a cutie and looks as if she has a good sense of humor. Weathered storms -- a cliché but then most love poetry is.
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What a lovely tribute to your wife. (Bet you get some tonight L0L). She's a cutie and looks as if she has a good sense of humor. Weathered storms -- a cliché but then most love poetry is.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Happy Anniversary, Dean and Keresna. With a gift of poetry like this there will be many, many more.
I'd never hurt you in the least. [I had never? or I would never? >> I'm going to take your meaning to be I would never, as a pledge of intent. 'cause if you've been married twenty years, and hadn't hurt her, you're a saint or she set her bar low. I think I'm safe with "would" not "had".
Great Job!
Jay
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Happy Anniversary, Dean and Keresna. With a gift of poetry like this there will be many, many more.
I'd never hurt you in the least. [I had never? or I would never? >> I'm going to take your meaning to be I would never, as a pledge of intent. 'cause if you've been married twenty years, and hadn't hurt her, you're a saint or she set her bar low. I think I'm safe with "would" not "had".
Great Job!
Jay
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
