~We've Weathered Storms...~
For my beautiful wife, Keresna, on our anniversary.99 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Congratulations on twenty years of always inviting the sun in to disperse the clouds. My wife and I celebrated our seventh last month. She wrote me an awesome poem and I ...said it with flowers. Oops. Happy Anniversary.
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Congratulations on twenty years of always inviting the sun in to disperse the clouds. My wife and I celebrated our seventh last month. She wrote me an awesome poem and I ...said it with flowers. Oops. Happy Anniversary.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Sasha
This is such a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. Beautifully written and clearly comes from the heart. I congratulate you on your anniversary...twenty years is quite impressive and may you have at least twenty more.
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This is such a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. Beautifully written and clearly comes from the heart. I congratulate you on your anniversary...twenty years is quite impressive and may you have at least twenty more.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from lindalcreel
What a beautiful tribute to your wife. This is better than a Hallmark Card because I know the writer and also know you are sincere. She must have loved reading this after you wrote it. This is something to put away and take out every once in a while.
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What a beautiful tribute to your wife. This is better than a Hallmark Card because I know the writer and also know you are sincere. She must have loved reading this after you wrote it. This is something to put away and take out every once in a while.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
"HAPPY ANIVERSARY" To my dearest friend and his wife, special these folks are from the get go. I am coming up to 49 in October on the 15th and is also my grandson's 21st birthday.I hope you all go do something nice tonight.
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"HAPPY ANIVERSARY" To my dearest friend and his wife, special these folks are from the get go. I am coming up to 49 in October on the 15th and is also my grandson's 21st birthday.I hope you all go do something nice tonight.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from deepwater
great art work on this and great pen to paper on your poem
We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
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great art work on this and great pen to paper on your poem
We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from c_lucas
Way to go, Dean. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very romantic read. Happy Anniversary. It's always a good thing to share your life with your soul mate.
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Way to go, Dean. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very romantic read. Happy Anniversary. It's always a good thing to share your life with your soul mate.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Muffins
A perfect love poem for the person who knows you probably better than you know yourself ,and still is willing to stick around.
The feeling of love is carried through this poem like a feather in a breeze; always beautiful, always delicate even in the middle of a wind storm. Many people today give up on relationships, marriages at the slight hint of wind, but if only they took the wisdom of the last stanza of this poem, they just might make it last:"We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
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A perfect love poem for the person who knows you probably better than you know yourself ,and still is willing to stick around.
The feeling of love is carried through this poem like a feather in a breeze; always beautiful, always delicate even in the middle of a wind storm. Many people today give up on relationships, marriages at the slight hint of wind, but if only they took the wisdom of the last stanza of this poem, they just might make it last:"We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a lovely Anniversary poem for you wife Dean.
Very sentimental and sweet. I truly expected to see the rain falling in your picture. Is that a picture of your wife? She's very pretty. Well done my friend. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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What a lovely Anniversary poem for you wife Dean.
Very sentimental and sweet. I truly expected to see the rain falling in your picture. Is that a picture of your wife? She's very pretty. Well done my friend. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Nancy, I really appreciate your heartfelt review. Yes, that is a picture which I drew from a photograph of her in 2013, for a Christmas gift. I really didn't do her justice, I'm afraid, but I included it because she's so fond of the picture.
Thanks so much again, and have a blessed week!~Dean:}
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You did a very good job. Be proud! Nancy
Comment from boxergirl
Well, Dean, you have caused me to tear up a little when I read your sweet poem dedicated to your wife. She is beautiful. Kudos to you for recognizing your blessings. The music compliments as well. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY to you both!!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Well, Dean, you have caused me to tear up a little when I read your sweet poem dedicated to your wife. She is beautiful. Kudos to you for recognizing your blessings. The music compliments as well. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY to you both!!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks very much, boxergirl, I really appreciate that. Your gift of six stars is a wonderful anniversary present, and I'm very grateful for the happy anniversary wishes.
That means a lot to me, my dear friend, thanks a million!~Dean:)
Comment from pipersfancy
Awwww! Dean... what can I say.... Awwww! Such a heartfelt and beautiful gift to your wife and soulmate of 20 years...
I feel I shouldn't mess with anything... leave it all as is... it's so wonderful!!!
(But, for the sake of meter, and flow, I'll go ahead and make only the tiniest of suggestions...!)
yet cloudy skies always turn blue --
but, cloudy skies will turn to blue -
Happy Anniversary to you and your beautiful Keresna!
PF
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Awwww! Dean... what can I say.... Awwww! Such a heartfelt and beautiful gift to your wife and soulmate of 20 years...
I feel I shouldn't mess with anything... leave it all as is... it's so wonderful!!!
(But, for the sake of meter, and flow, I'll go ahead and make only the tiniest of suggestions...!)
yet cloudy skies always turn blue --
but, cloudy skies will turn to blue -
Happy Anniversary to you and your beautiful Keresna!
PF
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Pipe, I truly appreciate your kind review and happy anniversary wishes. I made the edit as well, just as you suggested. Thanks for that as well!:)~Dean
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My pleasure, you are very welcome! Now, go pick a bouquet of tansy for your wife!
Hugs!
PF
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