~We've Weathered Storms...~
For my beautiful wife, Keresna, on our anniversary.99 total reviews
Comment from G.B. Smith
We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
I'd give a 6th star just for the music. Your entire program is spot on. I am proud of your work
Bear
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We've weathered storms, but made it through,
and yes, we still have work to do,
yet cloudy skies will turn to blue --
we'll make it, babe, just me and you...~
I'd give a 6th star just for the music. Your entire program is spot on. I am proud of your work
Bear
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
Comment from faragon
What a beautiful tribute to what must be a lovely person! The poem is a very easy read and very heartfelt. She is one lucky lady!!
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What a beautiful tribute to what must be a lovely person! The poem is a very easy read and very heartfelt. She is one lucky lady!!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
Comment from emrpoems
This is lovely gesture to your wife on your anniversary. It is good to witness this type of love between spouses and especially when it can be openly expressed. Tell your wife I challenge her to write a poem for you and post it on FS.
Good poetic style as usual Love the mono rhymes
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This is lovely gesture to your wife on your anniversary. It is good to witness this type of love between spouses and especially when it can be openly expressed. Tell your wife I challenge her to write a poem for you and post it on FS.
Good poetic style as usual Love the mono rhymes
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Any wife or husband to say the least would be honored to receive this; I especially like the repetition of the main key points & the rhyming scheme is there too; I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
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Any wife or husband to say the least would be honored to receive this; I especially like the repetition of the main key points & the rhyming scheme is there too; I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Dean, how very lovely! You've written with such tenderness, such heart, it's all so plain to see - congratulations to you both! This could be song lyrics - I can hear music as I read, and not the theme from Titanic (although I love that song.)
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Oh Dean, how very lovely! You've written with such tenderness, such heart, it's all so plain to see - congratulations to you both! This could be song lyrics - I can hear music as I read, and not the theme from Titanic (although I love that song.)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Singin' in the Rain
Very beautiful gift to your wife! Sounds like you have been blessed! I appreciate that you stuck to solid rhyming and good form. Wish you blessings on your anniversary!
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Very beautiful gift to your wife! Sounds like you have been blessed! I appreciate that you stuck to solid rhyming and good form. Wish you blessings on your anniversary!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from desire333
This was so surreal, your kind and warm words, delicate and yet gentle. You've done a terrific job on expressing your true love for your wife. I'm sure shes very proud of you. Thank you very much for sharing!
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This was so surreal, your kind and warm words, delicate and yet gentle. You've done a terrific job on expressing your true love for your wife. I'm sure shes very proud of you. Thank you very much for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from forestport12
such an elequent love poem with a wonderful cadence and rhyme that seems to dance off my tongue skip through an imaginery field of flowers on prairie beneath an infinite sky. Tis a love that is infinite...
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such an elequent love poem with a wonderful cadence and rhyme that seems to dance off my tongue skip through an imaginery field of flowers on prairie beneath an infinite sky. Tis a love that is infinite...
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from rod007
What a loving and magnificent tribute on your 20th anniversary to your dear wife. Be at peace and keep your marriage blessed for the next twenty years and beyond. Well done, Dean.
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What a loving and magnificent tribute on your 20th anniversary to your dear wife. Be at peace and keep your marriage blessed for the next twenty years and beyond. Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from JudyS
Dean, This is an awesome tribute poem to your wife. She's a lucky lady. Excellent job. Super picture to go with it as well. Have a good one, Judy
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Dean, This is an awesome tribute poem to your wife. She's a lucky lady. Excellent job. Super picture to go with it as well. Have a good one, Judy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
