Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "But best is the ice-cream "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from drivenbackward
So true, deepwater. We recently went away with my son. He went to the beach, down a waterslide, in the lazy river, etc. When we asked him his favorite part of the trip? Ice cream.
Great poem.
Long hot summers on a beach with warm winds blowing off the sea. -- Is this intended to be a comment or a question? It read like a question to me, but it ends with a period.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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So true, deepwater. We recently went away with my son. He went to the beach, down a waterslide, in the lazy river, etc. When we asked him his favorite part of the trip? Ice cream.
Great poem.
Long hot summers on a beach with warm winds blowing off the sea. -- Is this intended to be a comment or a question? It read like a question to me, but it ends with a period.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from playinaround
Gosh this brings me back. I love the picture you chose for your wonderful poem. Oh, I long for those carefree days... I love the rhyme, the style and wording of your poem. Anxious to see more of your writing:)
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Gosh this brings me back. I love the picture you chose for your wonderful poem. Oh, I long for those carefree days... I love the rhyme, the style and wording of your poem. Anxious to see more of your writing:)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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again thank you for the six and the review
Gary
Comment from Ben Colder
This is an excellent poem and great memories of yesterday. Yes the ice cream is the topping of the thought. Well done. This is poetry. Blessings
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This is an excellent poem and great memories of yesterday. Yes the ice cream is the topping of the thought. Well done. This is poetry. Blessings
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Ben
Comment from 1954speed
Very nicely done. It captures the essence of a youth's summer day. And very timely, considering our northern summer is winding its way toward fall. Well done
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Very nicely done. It captures the essence of a youth's summer day. And very timely, considering our northern summer is winding its way toward fall. Well done
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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thank you 1954
Comment from Bryan G
This is a beautiful poem with lots of memories. Your poem took me back to those wonderful days of summer when as a child everything was new and fresh. Life was one big adventure filled with great expectations. Thanks for taking me back to that special place.
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This is a beautiful poem with lots of memories. Your poem took me back to those wonderful days of summer when as a child everything was new and fresh. Life was one big adventure filled with great expectations. Thanks for taking me back to that special place.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Bryan
Comment from GangGreen
This poem evokes memories of a happy and safe childhood.A carefree atmosphere is created as the poet drifts through the memories and impressions of a long ago- long hot summer- eventually to drift asleep to see the wonders so free.Much Is alluded to in these seven lines yet the poet never indulges in nostalgia,rather dares to see through the eyes of a child-as stated in the powerful opening line.The Poet dares to write like a child,using the same end rhyme on every line though the effect is far from childish.Could hear the Gulls and taste the ice cream as Iread.
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This poem evokes memories of a happy and safe childhood.A carefree atmosphere is created as the poet drifts through the memories and impressions of a long ago- long hot summer- eventually to drift asleep to see the wonders so free.Much Is alluded to in these seven lines yet the poet never indulges in nostalgia,rather dares to see through the eyes of a child-as stated in the powerful opening line.The Poet dares to write like a child,using the same end rhyme on every line though the effect is far from childish.Could hear the Gulls and taste the ice cream as Iread.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you for this review and the six you gave
Gary
Comment from arnie47
I think childhood memories make the best subject matter for poems due to the fact as adults you can compare how your dreams and thoughts back then match up to your reality now. And if they don't they are pleasant embarkations to relieve the drudgery of the mundane every day and give you hope to dream again. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I think childhood memories make the best subject matter for poems due to the fact as adults you can compare how your dreams and thoughts back then match up to your reality now. And if they don't they are pleasant embarkations to relieve the drudgery of the mundane every day and give you hope to dream again. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Arnie
Comment from rjuselius
such outstanding imagery and quite breath-taking i might add! childhood was an easy time, so little humour over the top.
thank you for sharing this gem!
rebekka x
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such outstanding imagery and quite breath-taking i might add! childhood was an easy time, so little humour over the top.
thank you for sharing this gem!
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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Your welcome Rebekah
Comment from flylikeaneagle
deepwater: You are so creative. Your poem story is sweet.The precious memories with dad and mom are priceless and this child is blessed. Some children have only seen war. You deserve the all time best deepwater!!!
flylikeaneagle
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deepwater: You are so creative. Your poem story is sweet.The precious memories with dad and mom are priceless and this child is blessed. Some children have only seen war. You deserve the all time best deepwater!!!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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Thank you fly
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have described my day trips to the sea, perfectly! It was a time that children back then enjoyed the simple things that life had to give. I also had a donkey ride on the sandy beach. How many memories you have brought back for me. :) Sandra
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You have described my day trips to the sea, perfectly! It was a time that children back then enjoyed the simple things that life had to give. I also had a donkey ride on the sandy beach. How many memories you have brought back for me. :) Sandra
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
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Thank you Sandra
