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senryu (Stephen King: Dead at 66...)

Oh, say it isn't so!

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Dean

I was looking for your book when I found this jewel and I had to stop. I'm reading in my Kindle and I can't read the last line. Damn! Like the first two lines LoL

I'm a big Stephen King fan too, as you know. Great job sweetie pie. *gypsy hugs*

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2016
    Oh, darn it! I'm sorry you weren't able to read it all. I wonder how that happened?
    Thanks for checkin' it out, darling, just the same (sorry!)
    ~Dean ;)
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 18-Mar-2016
    I will check on my laptop :) I don't know why the kindle had problems, I don't usually.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 18-Mar-2016
    Nope! I don't see the last line on my laptop either. *sadness*
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2016
    I dunno what happened, but I corrected the problem. In the transition from the old FanStory to the new site, it got lost in cyberspace, LOL.
    Thanks again for letting me know, darlin'
    Hugs!!!
    ~Dean
Comment from w.j.debi
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I missed this news, but you have done an excellent job of encapsulating how Mr. King must have felt about it. The master of horror probably had a wonderful chuckle. Excellent entry for the contest, and I see you won. Congrats!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
    It was right on the heels of the news of the death of Robin Williams, debi. Someone hacked into Stephen's Facebook page and posted that he was dead at 66. I was devastated! I did some further research to try and find out exactly what had happened to him and learned it was all a hoax. I was very relieved, to say the least!

    Thanks for the congrats, and your kind review.:)
Comment from tbacha58
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Congratulations my friend, always the best, what a beautiful mind you've got Dean, full of surprises, full of great thoughts to come up always at the top. That is you, I am not surprised at all. Love Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

Comment from Acquired Taste
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Excellent - short - to the point - no questions left unanswered. Very much like the artwork - Carrie and his newest clown demon. Good Luck...AT=/

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    Thanks a bundle, Jean, I was worried about this one. Many do not like or appreciate the author's notes in senryu, but I felt I had to so in this instance. Otherwise, it could have been said that it was merely a quote (which it's not, as far as I know, but certainly sounded like something Mr. King would say, LOL), and not a poem or senryu at all.
reply by Acquired Taste on 19-Aug-2014
    Dean - never worry - your work is always good - mostly fabulous - and I have not a doubt in my mind - King would love your work!
    Jean
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    Thanks, Jean. I leaned everything I know from him, after all. photo S_zps3a58eae0.jpg
Comment from Bill Schott
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Your senryu, Stephen king dead at 66, with its seventeen syllables and 5-7-5 format really got my attention as national icon deaths seemed rampant. Nice picture. Happy day.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    Thanks, Bill, and it was indeed a very happy day for yours truly when I learned the following day that it was all a hoax! So close on the heels of Robin Williams death would have been too much to bear. I idolized them both.

    Thanks so much for the kind comments and encouraging review. It is appreciated!
Comment from livelylinda
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Author: well, your senyru certainly surprised me and had me all worried. Don't these people who pull hoaxes right now, know how it is disrespectful to Robin Williams and Betty Bacall who really did pass recently? My God, people are so stupid. This is an original and creative poem yet so, so tacky. livelylinda

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    Yes, it is hard to believe that people could be so cruel, livelylinda. And I apologize if it came across as tacky to you, it wasn't meant to be. I was only interpreting his reaction to such a cruel hoax, and I'm sure he took it all with a good laugh, knowing Stephen as I do.

    Have a wonderful week, my friend...
reply by livelylinda on 19-Aug-2014
    Dean: You know Stephen King? One question, does he act as strangely as he writes? I've followed him for years but behind at the moment . . . too busy writing and not enough time for reading. Linda
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    I converse with him through email from time to time. He liked one of my stories so much (I think my wife sent it to him, or my daughter) that he began to email me from time to time. I've never met him in person, although I'd like to.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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There have been a lot of hoax's with celebrities dying. When I hear of one dying I do my research before I believe it. I wish Robin Williams was a hoax but sadly it wasn't. :(

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
    I feel the same way, ExperiencingLiphe. When I heard Robin was dead, it tore e up. I grew up watching Mork & Mindy, then followed his career because he never failed to make me laugh. Then, hot on the heels of his passing, came the bogus report of Mr. Kings's death, who I idolize as a writer. I was so very relieved to learn the next day that it was all a hoax.

    Thanks so much for your kind review. Much appreciated!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

I thought, OMG! I didn't know he passed away. LOL, Glad it's just a hoax. Too much talent and too much to do yet before he rests.

Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
    Thanks, Jax, and when I first saw the news on his Facebook Fansite page, I was nearly beside myself. But, I did a bit of research and found out it was a phony report. It takes all kinds, huh? As for the contest, I'm losing, but there's still time. Keep your fingers crossed for me my buckeye friend! I really appreciate the review.
Comment from seaglass
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With all the awful news around the world and the death of Robin Williams, I never heard this false report. But your title caught my attention, I opened it right away.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
    Thanks, seaglass, and the false report was posted on his Facebook fan page, right on the heels of Robin Williams death. Him being my favorite author, I naturally did my own investigation. It took awhile, but I soon learned it was a hoax, thank goodness!

    Thanks again for the excellent review, my friend.
Comment from Muffins
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If this wasn't on fan story and I closed my eyes real tight, I can hear Stephen King saying actually,"My death was a hoax,but sure fun while it lasted.' It takes a lot of creative imagination to take the persona of a famous person and speak their words so precise that people think it's a quote.

I really hate celebrity death hoaxes. They are so depressing and after Robin Williams we don't need it.

If you don't win this contest. I'm going to hoax winning a contest on Fan story for you!



 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
    Hah ha, thanks, Muffins, but it ain't winning now, not at last check, at least. You're absolutely right, I had to crawl into Mr King's head for a moment (I wouldn't recommend it, or stay too long there. B-R-R-R-R-R!) and actually think what or how he might respond. I don't usually post author's notes in senryu or haiku, but if I hadn't, I would have been accused of plagiarizing his quote, and turning it into a poem. So, I kinda' felt I had to this time.

    I truly appreciate your entertaining and fun comments, and the exceptional six star rating as well.

    Much obliged!:)
reply by Muffins on 18-Aug-2014
    You deserved it. I forgot to tell you that the photo you chose was perfect!